thank you.
yeah... i dont have enough time to make the arms...
i even have no time to write this here ... shit ^^ i think theres something wrong :X
got to study now... thanks again for see and see =)
EDIT: YAY 300th post!!! (You notice?? 300!!! i love that film :D)
Beginners, post your Flash animations here.
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Nov 26, 2007 8:31 PM #69501
Nov 26, 2007 8:36 PM #69502
Quote from SoulEaterDouble post <_<
http://www.swfup.com/file/64422 My first 3D animation. Rank and C&C please.
18 fps: http://www.swfme.com/view/1281132
hmm, by far i think that was one of my favorites from you, keep it up like that and you animating will be really good, anyway, that's med beginner possibly, but work more on smoothing your sitcks, and making it smoother, but it was cool
Nov 26, 2007 9:11 PM #69506
Quote from Draco'Xhttp://www.swfup.com/file/65289
First succesful walking cycle. Swfup slowed it down, etc.
Non-biased critiscism, go.
Imma be picky, kay?
1) After the first step his arm goes forward, then back, then forward agian, which is a quite annoying little twitch.
2) Hes too bouncy, in my opinion. He doesnt need any bounce as walking doesnt take that much effort.
3) What smoothness did you use? If you're going for that style, Id suggest increasing the smoothness of the lines. Wait, I dont think you can with line, oh well.
4) His head doesnt go down at the same time as his body, I know what you were trying to achieve but it really isnt needed for a walk cycle.
5) GTFO the beginners section, you should be fine posting your animations in the actual flash section now, but as long as you really spend some time on them.
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Nov 26, 2007 9:31 PM #69508
ehh okay this sucks because it's my first attempt at a zoom like effect, and also I did it in English class and finished it in Western civilzation.. and i had to keep closing it 'cause the teachers would walk by... but enough for excuses (this is my second flash test)
View my swf file!
View my swf file!
Nov 26, 2007 9:35 PM #69509
thanks orbb for the comments.
How do i stop the wobbling ????
How do i stop the wobbling ????
Nov 26, 2007 9:37 PM #69510
@ FantaSTICK
:D
the basics are fine.
however, I would advise only using one brush stroke for each limb, it looked pretty ugly when it zoomed in for that reason alone.
Also, use smaller droplets of blood and make them a darker colour. I know it wont look right to start with, and you wont like using a darker red, but trust me, it looks SO MUCH BETTER.
As I said, the kick had good power, and even the jump was fairly satisfactory.
:D
the basics are fine.
however, I would advise only using one brush stroke for each limb, it looked pretty ugly when it zoomed in for that reason alone.
Also, use smaller droplets of blood and make them a darker colour. I know it wont look right to start with, and you wont like using a darker red, but trust me, it looks SO MUCH BETTER.
As I said, the kick had good power, and even the jump was fairly satisfactory.
Nov 26, 2007 9:40 PM #69511
hey mesmay how can i stop the wobbling
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Nov 26, 2007 9:42 PM #69512
Quote from Mesmay@ FantaSTICK
:D
the basics are fine.
however, I would advise only using one brush stroke for each limb, it looked pretty ugly when it zoomed in for that reason alone.
Also, use smaller droplets of blood and make them a darker colour. I know it wont look right to start with, and you wont like using a darker red, but trust me, it looks SO MUCH BETTER.
As I said, the kick had good power, and even the jump was fairly satisfactory.
thanks for the advice, yea i knew the limbs were terrible, i was just rushing it in class and too lazy to go back and fix it.
Edit: ive been meaning to ask , and i might as well ask now, How do add a flash animation as your avatar?
Nov 26, 2007 9:51 PM #69513
Quote from 0rbb@ Draco-Work more on smoothness and i know it's hard to do with line, but just try, but yeah, it was a bit bobbly, just work on a standard walk, go to the mall or tell a sibling to walk around a lot, lol
I didn't even know it was easier with brush. Ah, what the ****, line's better.
I'll try to fix it up again.
EDIT:
Quote from MesmayImma be picky, kay?
Appreciated much, but I fixed a few things.
http://www.swfup.com/file/65551
^ Fixed version
1) After the first step his arm goes forward, then back, then forward agian, which is a quite annoying little twitch.
I know what you mean, I'll try to work on that.
2) Hes too bouncy, in my opinion. He doesnt need any bounce as walking doesnt take that much effort.
Mmkay.
3) What smoothness did you use? If you're going for that style, Id suggest increasing the smoothness of the lines. Wait, I dont think you can with line, oh well.
Yeah, there's smoothing for line, but I've never seen it do any difference.
Oh hold on, it doesn't.
4) His head doesnt go down at the same time as his body, I know what you were trying to achieve but it really isnt needed for a walk cycle.
Check the fix'd version, might be slightly better.
5) GTFO the beginners section, you should be fine posting your animations in the actual flash section now, but as long as you really spend some time on them.
Lol, it's like the second time I post an animation here and I'm already told to leave the beginner's section.
Nov 26, 2007 10:10 PM #69515
i prefered that newer version, the bounce looked more in place, I dont know why but it just did.
Plus, did you add more frames inbetween?
Because it looked a lot smoother too.
If you didnt, then Im just stupid.
Plus, did you add more frames inbetween?
Because it looked a lot smoother too.
If you didnt, then Im just stupid.
Nov 26, 2007 10:14 PM #69516
alright here is my 5 sec clip for the anti-flash collab http://www.swfme.com/view/1134612
CC and rank please
CC and rank please
Nov 26, 2007 10:26 PM #69517
Quote from Mesmayi prefered that newer version, the bounce looked more in place, I dont know why but it just did.
Plus, did you add more frames inbetween?
Because it looked a lot smoother too.
If you didnt, then Im just stupid.
Same amount of frames, same fps, etc.
The only things changed were the knees' positioning and the arms' reactions.
Nov 26, 2007 11:47 PM #69524
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Nov 26, 2007 11:51 PM #69525
Nov 27, 2007 12:08 AM #69528
For a first submitted it's ok but the arms when he's shaking off the blood look funny