Quote from elite34

I call it erase and then disolve

You should try movements. Dissolving isn't that entertaining unless it has some actiony movements...


As for Fanta, the blood on the tackle looked more like a bloody meteor. I don't think you should have blood run off from the top, but only the bottom. I didn't really like the speed lines because since you're animating Frame-by-frame, you don't need to add them.

Quote from elite34

For a first submitted it's ok but the arms when he's shaking off the blood look funny

haha i intentionally did that

:( no rank for mine...................

how do i stop my sticks from wobbling

mesmay isnt nice to you i think =)

so i will tell you how.

either you use linetechnique or you have to draw your lines with the brush fast and without jerking around the mouse...

thats how i do.

i hope i did help you


EDIT: @ madhatter

Quote from madhatter666

:( no rank for mine...................

to be honest: its really bad. Stiff, choppy and not smoothened.

i think you didnt put effort into it... practice A LOT on basics!

dont try to do the greatest effects now, its better to do step for step coming up to inter.

-karthago

http://www.swfup.com/file/66207 This is my combo entry. Rank and C&C please.
Oh yes, vote for me too!

yeah...i didnt put a whole lot of time into it.....i will try harder next time

okay i didint like the eyes (when was shining) it looked like he would have 4 eyes and after the blow he standed up really bad everething else was a-ok-ay

I don't know if you can rank yet, but rank?

Anyways, I made another animation. Which I DEMAND C&C AND RANK FOR!!! >:3
http://www.swfup.com/file/66321

Quote from SoulEater

I don't know if you can rank yet, but rank?

Anyways, I made another animation. Which I DEMAND C&C AND RANK FOR!!! >:3
http://www.swfup.com/file/66321

its not that bad, but kind of unrealistic....

watch "Le Parcours-Videos" to get the right feeling of stunts lol or whatever... work on easing

that collab entry wasnt good...
the eyes looked terrible and the movements were weird, even if they werent ment to look realistic

yeah how i did just say: work on easing... and particles, and basics, and movements =) theres a long way for you to go but youre not a lone (im still not inter, too :X ...)

Quote from madhatter666

yeah...i didnt put a whole lot of time into it.....i will try harder next time

yeah, thats the right position ;)

You never gave a rank. I put the words in caps! I demanded a rank.

Also, for the comp entry, I gave the stick stretchy limbs as a power.

Quote from SoulEater

You never gave a rank. I put the words in caps! I demanded a rank.

Also, for the comp entry, I gave the stick stretchy limbs as a power.

I DONT HAVE TO RANK YOU!

I said it looked weird, EVEN if it was supposed to be that unrealistic -.-

i wont rank anyone, if i dont want to k?! also, i needed more than this to give some1 a ranking

I gave ya two :)
Maybe a third will help.

ill say med...but not strong

here's one kicktest i just made... i rushed the blood

but remind: im rusty =)



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