Run loop,brush is a bit complicated so i used sticks, i think i antersized
I think i did ok for a begginer although i could of make the ground move more fluidly.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1189192
anyways i only spent 10 minutes of this so yea.
Beginners, post your Flash animations here.
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Dec 6, 2007 3:48 PM #70713
Dec 6, 2007 3:57 PM #70715
Well, it was choppy and I think that feet was too big. Background was moving to fast, and what was about with that ball?... O.o'
Dec 6, 2007 4:49 PM #70718
Quote from .ALEXEHlol i'm his brother,
.......
I knew this.......
<_<
Anyway, devour, i shall give you some good c&c on msn....
for now, it wasn't too bad, movements were odd, sticks were wobbly, and some things seemed like it couldn't just happen...But your always getting better...so keep it up...
Ragingsesangen-All i saw was a ball.....But yeah, the background, hae more frames...it looked like you only had lik 4 frames for the background moving, add more frames and backgroun and it'll be good...
Dec 6, 2007 5:42 PM #70724
dunno what the ball was??
Dec 6, 2007 5:57 PM #70725
dang sorry about that, it was a silly mistake.
Dec 6, 2007 7:57 PM #70734
Dec 6, 2007 8:00 PM #70735
Quote from Karthago
Particles weren't that good. More easing. Particles dissipate too quickly.
Dec 6, 2007 8:30 PM #70736
What omega said, and maybe have somemore frames where it started disolving so it doesn' look as if it just dissapears to the outer part of it and then dissolves....
Dec 6, 2007 8:43 PM #70737
I think that particles should dissapear slowly and going more outside.
Bow strange... what was abour with that disapear and apear?
Bow strange... what was abour with that disapear and apear?
Dec 6, 2007 9:13 PM #70739
Quote from SoulEaterIm takin' out the fire hose!
http://www.swfup.com/file/73811 Here are some random tests about practically everything except blood. C&C
Only got one comment. Anybody else?
Dec 6, 2007 9:14 PM #70740
quite smooth.but very wobbly,you do use oinion skin right?
Dec 6, 2007 9:15 PM #70742
Yes. Animating is practically impossible without it.
Dec 6, 2007 9:16 PM #70743
lol yer sorry for the stupid comment.
Dec 6, 2007 9:16 PM #70744
Quote from SoulEaterOnly got one comment. Anybody else?
Easing is much better. Wobbly as hell though.
Too much size change.
It's fairly smooth; more force. It's a bit slow.
You've improved. Good job.
Dec 6, 2007 10:17 PM #70749
Quote from 0megaParticles weren't that good. More easing. Particles dissipate too quickly.
omg I thought, that they were good! hm okay.. thanks for comment..
yeah but i wanted the particles to disolve this way
... and it was my first attempt at making that style of particles.. what do you expect :Nooooooo:
was it really that bad :(