Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Terix
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Dec 7, 2007 1:09 AM #70787
my first (good) explosion...

http://www.swfup.com/file/74628
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Dec 7, 2007 1:13 AM #70788
i liked it...i thought the sound was very nicely timed
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Dec 7, 2007 1:14 AM #70789
I didn't really like the particles, but the explosion isn't too bad at all. Make the particles stay longer, and add some easing.

Get on msn?
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Dec 7, 2007 1:14 AM #70790
Quote from madhatter666
i liked it...i thought the sound was very nicely timed


It doesn't take all that much to put sound into an animation.
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Dec 7, 2007 1:15 AM #70791
lol yeah i know but i wanted to compliment him :D
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Dec 7, 2007 2:12 AM #70796
LOOK AT MEH SHITTY WALK LOOP.
http://www.antiup.net/files/Cruddy%20walk%20loop.swf
I think I'll use the pencil tool to draw.
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Dec 7, 2007 2:18 AM #70797
no offence if you think the following is offence but that sucks because wobbly and unsmooth
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Dec 7, 2007 2:20 AM #70798
Great way to state the obvious. =/
I'm working on re-drawing the sticks. As I've said, it's shitty.
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Dec 7, 2007 2:58 AM #70799
The sticks were horrible but that walk was nice.
no sliding at all.
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Dec 7, 2007 3:00 AM #70801
Any tips on re-drawing sticks to make them bettar?
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Dec 7, 2007 3:05 AM #70802
try and keep you're arms and legs the same shape as the onion skin.
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Dec 7, 2007 8:03 AM #70826
http://www.swfup.com/file/74853

i redid a short C&C please
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Dec 7, 2007 8:11 AM #70827
Quote from Dark
Any tips on re-drawing sticks to make them bettar?


Don't say "bettar".

Quote from iregger
http://www.swfup.com/file/74853

i redid a short C&C please


The punches were actually very good, but the kicks were too choppy.
Add more frames, especially for that last kick.
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Dec 7, 2007 1:02 PM #70836
HEEEEEELP!

I recently made this:http://www.swfup.com/file/74986


I wanted it to be my Avatar and i made it with MX at "100x100pixels"

but when i export it as an gif, its totally UGLY! please give me an advice!!
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Dec 7, 2007 1:41 PM #70845
Yeah, exporting things as gif. in flash isn't good. You got to find good swf to gif converter.

Edit:
And another anim for a best pwnd comp.
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=4152