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Dec 9, 2007 4:16 PM #71186
Yeah, secondsight, maybe make the body shorter and the legs longer, i don't like the proportions. Other than that, it was good except for the blob part at the end because throughout the animation, he was moving in on particular way, how in the hell can he transfrom like all of a sudden, good job though.
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Dec 9, 2007 6:21 PM #71199
http://www.swfme.com/view/1266912

my movie for a comp CC please
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Dec 9, 2007 7:07 PM #71205
it was alright. the physics, blood, and reactions could be better, but its okay.


heres a water splash test I just did.

http://terix01.deviantart.com/art/sorry-71738012
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Dec 9, 2007 7:20 PM #71209
When the water came out, it looked funny. You should add some highlights to he water so it could look a little more realistic. Other than that, it was ok.

SHITTY ANIMATION TIME.
http://www.swfup.com/file/77078#view
BETTER DRAWINGS.
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Dec 9, 2007 7:48 PM #71214
it is wobbly as hell...work on redrawing
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Dec 9, 2007 7:50 PM #71215
Better than my last one.
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Dec 9, 2007 9:19 PM #71223
what was ur last one?
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Dec 9, 2007 9:29 PM #71228
This.
http://www.antiup.net/files/Cruddy%20walk%20loop.swf
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Dec 9, 2007 9:46 PM #71235
ur first one coulda been better if it was not so wobbly...do u have a smooth tool?
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Dec 9, 2007 10:28 PM #71246
Dark they were really bad....Set the smoothing in the properties of brush to 50 and work on choppyness add more frames...I'll make a one leg jump example for ya real quick.
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Dec 9, 2007 10:33 PM #71247
Dark, use the onion skin tool. And redraw each frame.
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Dec 9, 2007 11:22 PM #71263
O.K. this started out as a simple punch test but I was having fun so I just continued. http://antiup.net/view.php?id=4395 Please C & C.
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Dec 9, 2007 11:36 PM #71264
Ummm okay that was wierd...it looked like he was slam dancing.
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Dec 10, 2007 1:21 AM #71272
hey... should i like wait until i can link urls before i put stuff here, cause i don't see any others just on the pages instead of a url thingie... i do brush style btw, want to get better.
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Dec 10, 2007 1:35 AM #71273
http://antiup.net/files/airkick.swf
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