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Dec 10, 2007 8:20 PM #71337
I'd like to get more comments on thaaaaaat!

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please c&c!!!!
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Dec 10, 2007 8:32 PM #71338
Quick combo I didn't finish yet.
http://www.swfup.com/file/78518
Is there a smoothing tool for MX? Because I can't find one. I'm trying to fix the wobblyness. If...that's a word.
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Dec 10, 2007 8:41 PM #71339
Imo, you are getting better, i say you should be out of here soon, but these are some things you should work on.

The sticks were disformed, you want the legs to be longer then the body itself.
Blood was odd, if you want to go for something more realistic, try working with weapon he is using, if it is blunt, than it should just impale him, not splatter blud unless it could cut through the skin, sword would be more of blood being thrown out from the wound because of the swords thrust and movement. The first step seemed kind of cool, but was too big of a jump.

So work on sticks, blood types for certain occasions. Oh and work on the actions of the other guy, wast to good. You are getting better.

CJ, stick to brush.
Dark, odd, very very odd, just bouncing on one leg, use onion skin and smoothing
Madhatter, work on blood and such, first of all you need to learn some better movements, kai?
Trigun: read a lot of tuts.....

Everyone, Study animations a lot, and then try to figure the way they do it and draw their sticks, and then you will see. That's what ive learned so far
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Dec 10, 2007 8:42 PM #71340
I do use onionskin. =/ I have a hard time keeping it within..the onionskin.
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Dec 10, 2007 8:42 PM #71341
Sorry for double post, but the punch was wobbly of course, and im not too sure if there is one or not, but make the punch fast with more force too.

And karthago i got skype now so yeah, add me.
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Dec 10, 2007 8:54 PM #71344
thanks orbb... yeah i will download skype again and then pm you...

that thing what the red guy had in my anim wasnt a sword if you think so...

it shall be a curved staff

thanks for your advices... yeah that blood was odd... i rushed it a bit... i think i should take more time for effects...

i wont get outa here ! this beginner section is friendlier than the open threading imo...

-karthago
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Dec 10, 2007 9:17 PM #71353
nice animation karthago.
can i add you on msn?
if you dont have msn what do you have?
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Dec 10, 2007 9:25 PM #71354
Quote from Karthago
I'd like to get more comments on thaaaaaat!

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please c&c!!!!

Awsome video, but the reaction was horrible, the stick should of like bent around his head, not bounce right off, and blood goes up. After that, get outta here!
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Dec 10, 2007 9:46 PM #71358
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I'd say brush .

Yer
stay with brush.
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Dec 10, 2007 10:01 PM #71360
Lawl heres a random explosion test I guess...
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=cba53ef2
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Dec 10, 2007 10:02 PM #71361
I lol'd .
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Dec 10, 2007 10:03 PM #71362
Lawl Its kinda horrible
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Dec 10, 2007 10:09 PM #71363
Omg, the sound made my day, but the animation didn't, hmm, looks like particles would work for you. So do that.
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Dec 10, 2007 10:14 PM #71364
HOLY SHIT ANOTHER ANIMAYSHUN.
http://www.swfup.com/file/78647
BETTER DRAWINGS.
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Dec 10, 2007 10:51 PM #71368
I didn't like, stick to brush, make running more fluid.
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