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Dec 10, 2007 11:58 PM #71376
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HOLY SHIT ANOTHER ANIMAYSHUN.
http://www.swfup.com/file/78647
BETTER DRAWINGS.



Here is one thing he learned:

THRUST! *HUMP* THRUST! *HUMP* THRUST! *HUMP* THRUST! *HUMP*
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Dec 10, 2007 11:59 PM #71377
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HOLY SHIT ANOTHER ANIMAYSHUN.
http://www.swfup.com/file/78647
BETTER DRAWINGS.


The animation's all wrong. Do you run like that?
First, change the position. No one can run like that, change the back of the stickman.
Change the legs and the arms. They are disproportionate and have too much easing. It looks like the stickfigure is sliding on the floor.
And up the frame rate.

Practice practice practice.

EDIT: Guy's head should be bobbing up and down as well.
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Dec 11, 2007 1:12 AM #71392
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Here is one thing he learned:

THRUST! *HUMP* THRUST! *HUMP* THRUST! *HUMP* THRUST! *HUMP*


....No.


As for the others, I'll listen to the advice. I'm sticking with brush tool, but I'll probably be submitting some art and animation.
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Dec 11, 2007 1:19 AM #71394
Heres a little test is did yesterday. I am messing around with different things using the brush, trying to figure out what style i am best with and what i like. at this point i cant really tell what i will be good at.

Image
is it ok to post stuff directly on the board like this?
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Dec 11, 2007 2:32 AM #71405
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is it ok to post stuff directly on the board like this?



I've seen peaple do it before. no problem really.

Its cool. your style is like cyiadine and happieness.
work on drawing arms, seeing that there WERE no arms.
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Dec 11, 2007 2:38 AM #71406
also work on his legs...they resized alot

terix i love ur avatar did u draw that urself?
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Dec 11, 2007 4:56 AM #71425
http://www.swfme.com/view/1209042

I made a shuriken, and I wanted to use it. I used it. Here you go! =3
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Dec 11, 2007 4:59 AM #71427
it didn't look bad. Blood did, but the shuriken wan't that bad. Keep it up.
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Dec 11, 2007 5:09 AM #71428
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also work on his legs...they resized alot

terix i love ur avatar did u draw that urself?



*cough* GOOGLE *cough*

just google "emo heart" and go to images. (no, I'm not emo)
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Dec 11, 2007 12:48 PM #71436
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nice animation karthago.
can i add you on msn?
if you dont have msn what do you have?


.... i will try to get msn again... please pm me if you have got ICQ (5.1 is the best version if you wanna download it)

my number is right in my profile i think but if it isnt: 381-979-690
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Dec 11, 2007 1:30 PM #71437
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thanks dark but i wanted the slowmo to be like that... cai? could you please comment mine? i personally need you to comment my videos ^^

hm.. that line think looked weird.. the knees changed place... i would say you should stay at brushanimating... i will,too


Sorry that I'm posting now, but I was sleeping and you guys maded in BS 3
pages ^^. Well anyway slow-mo isn't stoping the time, he should move but
only a bit, you can also use a lower opacity guy coming "after him". You know
what I mean, right?
You need to work on blood adnreaction too.
-I hope it helped ^^
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Dec 11, 2007 6:14 PM #71440
okay... yahy cj that was helpfull but i would like to know if you liked the whole thing or if you disliked it..

and orbb? thats a my style with the legs... in that, they are a bit short yeah.

anyways i dont see anything wrong at the reaction?? O.o
he just stood till he got slashed cause i didnt had tha time to make him try to block.

and i personally love that "slow-mo" ... maybe its not the "slow-mo" in the traditional meaning but i really wanted it to be like that.

EDIT: i will work on a new one soon (no time this week... to many examinations :( )
and will post it here k? i want you all to prepare your comments :D

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[SIZE="6"]HERE THE 2nd ATTEMPT FOR BLOOD:[/SIZE]

http://www.swfme.com/view/1087622

i tried to make the blood how i want it... not how a tut or something tells me to do it =)

PLEASE TELL ME IF ITS BETTER"!!!!!!!!!!!!"

EDIT2: COULD SOMEONE PLEASE LINK ME A BLOODTUTORIAL?!?! DIDNT FIND ANY IN THE FLASH BEGINNERS SECTION WHICH ARE GOOD.

btw: 400th post yay^^
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Dec 11, 2007 9:17 PM #71447
Was kinda bored..
http://antiup.net/files/random8.swf
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Dec 11, 2007 9:18 PM #71448
What the hell?
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Dec 11, 2007 9:19 PM #71449
Random to a whole new level.
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