http://www.swfup.com/file/91514#view
C&C please looking for good tips so i can improve
Beginners, post your Flash animations here.
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Dec 23, 2007 10:08 PM #73512
Dec 23, 2007 10:13 PM #73514
Dec 23, 2007 10:55 PM #73527
Quote from cjb
Really Bad....
1st one
- Why was there corn?
- Was it supposed to distract us
- Work on easing
- Blood
- Movements
- And drawing corn
- work on Easing
- Explosions
- blood
- and movements
Dec 23, 2007 11:04 PM #73534
Quote from Darkness-Darkness
2nd one
- Anticipation
Since when do falls require anticipation?
Dec 23, 2007 11:13 PM #73542
the corn is there just to be random and i felt like it. I dont try to distract people.
Are you distracting me with a small child dancing on your sig or are you just a pedofile? I really dont want to go to your child porn site.
Are you distracting me with a small child dancing on your sig or are you just a pedofile? I really dont want to go to your child porn site.
Dec 23, 2007 11:19 PM #73545
Quote from BlasterSince when do falls require anticipation?
Im talking about that lame hop thing before the slash....Put it in the wrong one.Fixed it
Quote from cjbthe corn is there just to be random and i felt like it. I dont try to distract people.
Are you distracting me with a small child dancing on your sig or are you just a pedofile? I really dont want to go to your child porn site.
Your loss Child porn FTW.....jk..Let me break this down
Small angry asian children dancing=Funny
Corn=Cliche and trying to hard.
Dec 23, 2007 11:24 PM #73548
whatev i was jk-ing anyway.
Dec 24, 2007 9:40 AM #73737
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Dec 24, 2007 6:56 PM #73806
0rbb, its looks like its starting pretty sweet , keep it up
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Dec 25, 2007 1:54 AM #73896
Hi, here is my first flash work:
swfup.com/file/92719 [add the "www", is just because I can't post URL links)
The first flash movie I made ever, about my stick characters on their newest adventure, is the trailer of the movie I'm going to make, It's about Stickman White (my main character, his stories are in comics I make), he has much adventures, lives in another universe (not ours :P) and fights for protecting it from threatens, along his rival Stickman Black (he says "I just fight because I'm the only one who will destroy to White", but deeply, he appreciates the world too), and Neo Stickman (from a Matrix parody, he's the cool one).
They appeared in many parodies and they learnt many special techniques like Hadouken, Kaioken (Stickman White and the Stick version of mysef are the only ones capable to perform it), and a lot of more stuff (like Metamour Fusion), they have parody and original enemies (you'll see)
They have much previous stories and I'll make them later, so, I hope you enjoy my work.
P.S: The concept is Dragon Ball Style, I know, and I don't own it, and, please, don't make so hard criticisms, I'm new on this, that's my first work and I made it without any knowledge about animation (nobody taught me). Thanks
swfup.com/file/92719 [add the "www", is just because I can't post URL links)
The first flash movie I made ever, about my stick characters on their newest adventure, is the trailer of the movie I'm going to make, It's about Stickman White (my main character, his stories are in comics I make), he has much adventures, lives in another universe (not ours :P) and fights for protecting it from threatens, along his rival Stickman Black (he says "I just fight because I'm the only one who will destroy to White", but deeply, he appreciates the world too), and Neo Stickman (from a Matrix parody, he's the cool one).
They appeared in many parodies and they learnt many special techniques like Hadouken, Kaioken (Stickman White and the Stick version of mysef are the only ones capable to perform it), and a lot of more stuff (like Metamour Fusion), they have parody and original enemies (you'll see)
They have much previous stories and I'll make them later, so, I hope you enjoy my work.
P.S: The concept is Dragon Ball Style, I know, and I don't own it, and, please, don't make so hard criticisms, I'm new on this, that's my first work and I made it without any knowledge about animation (nobody taught me). Thanks
Dec 25, 2007 11:09 AM #73942
www.swfup.com/file/92719 - Here you go.
Choppy, bad effects. Almost all anim is word's.
Make something that we could tell you what should you work on.
Dec 25, 2007 1:02 PM #73947
Practicing teh punch-
http://www.swfme.com/view/1279112
Edit-
This isn't really anything, but to test the grid and its resizing.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1068612
http://www.swfme.com/view/1279112
Edit-
This isn't really anything, but to test the grid and its resizing.
http://www.swfme.com/view/1068612
Dec 25, 2007 3:51 PM #73954
My first animation with a tablet. http://www.swfme.com/view/1281822 I'm still not used to it =\
Dec 25, 2007 3:54 PM #73955
congrats souleater. merry xmas @ll.
yeah, you should get into it. I don't want to say anymore because i want to rescue your xmas-mood =)
yeah, you should get into it. I don't want to say anymore because i want to rescue your xmas-mood =)
Dec 25, 2007 3:55 PM #73956
Haha, I already know it's bad, but I'll be better very soon.