Devour:it resizes,and you dont draw your stiks very good they are not like --- but like ~~~.
Terix: loved the blood but something was strange in it..mabe the fall cos it looked like he loosed all of his bones
Can i get C&C on this http://www.swfup.com/file/89267
Beginners, post your Flash animations here.
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Dec 22, 2007 8:28 AM #73079
Dec 22, 2007 11:03 AM #73084
Quote from BlasterK, Cai, don't use 40 FPS, unless you're just experimenting. The head was wobbly, so fix that. The animation itself wasn't that good, it didn't have alot of force. But it's pretty smooth. I guess you have potential. Just keep praticing dude, and if you have questions, feel free to PM me. Also, if you haven't signed up on SL(Shiftlimits) yet, do so. You will get alot of good C&C. Good luck :]
Thx, I'm preety sure that I'm gonna sign up.
It's nice for me that someone like YOU are giving me C&C.
'Couse you're a nice animator - and thanks again!
Edit: SSS - you already get comments on that.
Terix - wow! Rly nice blood. Keep makng it like that, but I don't like falling.
Work on movments.
Dec 22, 2007 11:08 AM #73085
Cay i updated the last one...
Dec 22, 2007 11:09 AM #73086
Quote from TerixOH MY GOD, CAN SOMEONE PLEEEASE COMENT!? I've waited six hours, and no replies.
http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs24/f/2007/355/0/c/another_friggen_blood_test____by_terix01.swf
Like CJ said, the falling was a bit weird. As for the blood: It was good, but think of this, if you would get shot in RL, would your blood just disappear in mid air, or would it fall to the ground? So next time you're animating blood, let some fall on the ground to make it more realistic. Good luck.
Dec 22, 2007 12:05 PM #73088
Well, I made an combo test. It's nothing great, but I wanted some C&C
Do you guys think that I could go out from Begginers Section now?
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm
Do you guys think that I could go out from Begginers Section now?
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm
Dec 22, 2007 12:13 PM #73090
Quote from Cai JohnsonWell, I made an combo test. It's nothing great, but I wanted some C&C
Do you guys think that I could go out from Begginers Section now?
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm
Your sticks are a bit wobbly, and he slides a bit. The moves look pretty good and the anim was pretty smooth. Good job, just work on wobblyness.
Dec 22, 2007 7:29 PM #73125
Dec 22, 2007 10:21 PM #73145
y post it if it is shit?
Dec 22, 2007 10:27 PM #73147
Ow gosh, couldn't you just give some comment's?
Well, It's choppy and you should work on easing.
Here is another I made, but I want to get comments on other so:
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=c468b262
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm
Well, It's choppy and you should work on easing.
Here is another I made, but I want to get comments on other so:
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=c468b262
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm
Dec 22, 2007 10:32 PM #73148
@CJ: The only thing that seemed wrong with it were the physics, he needs anticipation before he does the backflip. I think you're ready for your own thread dude :] Btw, what FPS is it?
Dec 22, 2007 10:37 PM #73149
Quote from Cai JohnsonOw gosh, couldn't you just give some comment's?
Well, It's choppy and you should work on easing.
Here is another I made, but I want to get comments on other so:
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=c468b262
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm
The second one was super shitty...Now the first was pretty good..
Just add more frames and anticipation....and lower the fps a little bit.
Dec 22, 2007 10:45 PM #73152
Quote from Blaster@CJ: The only thing that seemed wrong with it were the physics, he needs anticipation before he does the backflip. I think you're ready for your own thread dude :] Btw, what FPS is it?
It's 24. Thanks dude.
Double D: Your face is shitty, if you cant comment good, than dont comment
Dec 23, 2007 1:49 AM #73170
erm cai... i think darkness-darkness's comment was quite good.
he just speaks it out in harsh words.
i agree with him.
damn.. you improved very much... i think i should start animating again..
he just speaks it out in harsh words.
i agree with him.
damn.. you improved very much... i think i should start animating again..
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Dec 23, 2007 9:15 PM #73488
how do i upload the movies?
Dec 23, 2007 9:22 PM #73497
Quote from isikhow do i upload the movies?
-_-
use:
www.swfme.com
www.swfup.com
or something like that...