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Dec 22, 2007 8:28 AM #73079

Devour:it resizes,and you dont draw your stiks very good they are not like --- but like ~~~.
Terix: loved the blood but something was strange in it..mabe the fall cos it looked like he loosed all of his bones

Can i get C&C on this http://www.swfup.com/file/89267

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Dec 22, 2007 11:03 AM #73084

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K, Cai, don't use 40 FPS, unless you're just experimenting. The head was wobbly, so fix that. The animation itself wasn't that good, it didn't have alot of force. But it's pretty smooth. I guess you have potential. Just keep praticing dude, and if you have questions, feel free to PM me. Also, if you haven't signed up on SL(Shiftlimits) yet, do so. You will get alot of good C&C. Good luck :]

Thx, I'm preety sure that I'm gonna sign up.
It's nice for me that someone like YOU are giving me C&C.
'Couse you're a nice animator - and thanks again!

Edit: SSS - you already get comments on that.
Terix - wow! Rly nice blood. Keep makng it like that, but I don't like falling.
Work on movments.

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Dec 22, 2007 11:08 AM #73085

Cay i updated the last one...

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Dec 22, 2007 11:09 AM #73086

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OH MY GOD, CAN SOMEONE PLEEEASE COMENT!? I've waited six hours, and no replies.

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs24/f/2007/355/0/c/another_friggen_blood_test____by_terix01.swf

Like CJ said, the falling was a bit weird. As for the blood: It was good, but think of this, if you would get shot in RL, would your blood just disappear in mid air, or would it fall to the ground? So next time you're animating blood, let some fall on the ground to make it more realistic. Good luck.

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Dec 22, 2007 12:05 PM #73088

Well, I made an combo test. It's nothing great, but I wanted some C&C
Do you guys think that I could go out from Begginers Section now?
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm

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Dec 22, 2007 12:13 PM #73090

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Well, I made an combo test. It's nothing great, but I wanted some C&C
Do you guys think that I could go out from Begginers Section now?
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm

Your sticks are a bit wobbly, and he slides a bit. The moves look pretty good and the anim was pretty smooth. Good job, just work on wobblyness.

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Dec 22, 2007 7:29 PM #73125

This is shit

http://www.swfme.com/view/1292192

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Dec 22, 2007 10:21 PM #73145

y post it if it is shit?

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Dec 22, 2007 10:27 PM #73147

Ow gosh, couldn't you just give some comment's?
Well, It's choppy and you should work on easing.

Here is another I made, but I want to get comments on other so:
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=c468b262
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm

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Dec 22, 2007 10:32 PM #73148

@CJ: The only thing that seemed wrong with it were the physics, he needs anticipation before he does the backflip. I think you're ready for your own thread dude :] Btw, what FPS is it?

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Dec 22, 2007 10:37 PM #73149

Quote from Cai Johnson
Ow gosh, couldn't you just give some comment's?
Well, It's choppy and you should work on easing.

Here is another I made, but I want to get comments on other so:
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=c468b262
http://www.swfupload.com/view/109481.htm

The second one was super shitty...Now the first was pretty good..
Just add more frames and anticipation....and lower the fps a little bit.

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Dec 22, 2007 10:45 PM #73152

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@CJ: The only thing that seemed wrong with it were the physics, he needs anticipation before he does the backflip. I think you're ready for your own thread dude :] Btw, what FPS is it?

It's 24. Thanks dude.

Double D: Your face is shitty, if you cant comment good, than dont comment

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Dec 23, 2007 1:49 AM #73170

erm cai... i think darkness-darkness's comment was quite good.

he just speaks it out in harsh words.

i agree with him.

damn.. you improved very much... i think i should start animating again..

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Dec 23, 2007 9:15 PM #73488

how do i upload the movies?

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Dec 23, 2007 9:22 PM #73497

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how do i upload the movies?

-_-

use:

www.swfme.com

www.swfup.com

or something like that...