Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Jan 11, 2008 4:09 PM #77669
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so im animating a bit again...


You stoped?
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Jan 11, 2008 4:15 PM #77670
yes^^

tbh i animate 1-2 days and then i stop for 1 month or so...

thats my cyclus lolz^^

EDIT: i increased the fps to 19 from 16

http://www.swfme.com/view/1016942

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Jan 11, 2008 4:23 PM #77671
Ok,last time I saw really nice one from you,this one was ok,you have to be more active animator.
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Jan 11, 2008 5:39 PM #77675
so tell me what do you dislike this time?
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Jan 11, 2008 5:56 PM #77676
It's ok,the stick looks a bit weird.Animate more !!
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Jan 11, 2008 6:01 PM #77677
Stick looks weirdo like Tawnik said. And animate moar!!!!

Why? Because......uhhh...It's good for you. ^_^
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Jan 11, 2008 6:03 PM #77678
thats my fricken style ... and thats because i soomed in hard!

well i like this style =P

yeah ima do some more stuff

EDIT: just seen it again and i may accept it... i drew him a bit wrong lol^^
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Jan 11, 2008 6:14 PM #77679
I mean, stick is ok, just wobbly and ugly, fix him up.
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Jan 11, 2008 9:26 PM #77688
not finished... 35%(roughly) done

I no the scene select doesnt work :)
here u go: http://www.swfup.com/file/MTA1NDU2#view
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Jan 11, 2008 9:39 PM #77692
Yea heres a kicking thing, im still working on completing the body, i usually work of the legs first then the rest of the body, i'll post the full body soon

http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/3lW8G7Nn-1Gl
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Jan 11, 2008 10:10 PM #77694
NegaDrain-Needs work, one of my favorite songs though. haha. Anyway, the background doesn't fit the animation. It's too detailed. the sticks are ugly. You need a lot more practice. But it's ok. Keep working on basic movements, physics, easing, and anticipation, pretty much everything.

Ragingraengan-not bad, i really don't like line that much, but it was ok. Try making the size of the line thicker. Imo.
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Jan 11, 2008 10:17 PM #77695
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I kinda messed up on this one...

http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/OYWfzyY0-ukm



I'm starting to agree with cicada about comeing to the beginner's section... ¬_¬


comments?
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Jan 11, 2008 11:04 PM #77699
I refuse to give a comment to your anim, 'cause you agree with cicada.

thats a huge sin!
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Jan 11, 2008 11:07 PM #77702
Kai, Terix.

It was sloppy.

And wobblt. Could use more easing and smoothness. Work more now.
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Jan 11, 2008 11:57 PM #77718
wow, damn, I was sarcastic. jeez...
but thanks...