Beginners, post your Flash animations here.
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Tawnik2Posts: 2,292
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View Profile so im animating a bit again...
You stoped?
Karthago2Posts: 653
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View Profile yes^^
tbh i animate 1-2 days and then i stop for 1 month or so...
thats my cyclus lolz^^
EDIT: i increased the fps to 19 from 16
http://www.swfme.com/view/1016942
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Tawnik2Posts: 2,292
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View Profile Ok,last time I saw really nice one from you,this one was ok,you have to be more active animator.
Karthago2Posts: 653
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View Profile so tell me what do you dislike this time?
Tawnik2Posts: 2,292
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View Profile It's ok,the stick looks a bit weird.Animate more !!
EtchPosts: 1,239
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View Profile Stick looks weirdo like Tawnik said. And animate moar!!!!
Why? Because......uhhh...It's good for you. ^_^
Karthago2Posts: 653
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View Profile thats my fricken style ... and thats because i soomed in hard!
well i like this style =P
yeah ima do some more stuff
EDIT: just seen it again and i may accept it... i drew him a bit wrong lol^^
EtchPosts: 1,239
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View Profile I mean, stick is ok, just wobbly and ugly, fix him up.
Ahtex!Posts: 427
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View Profile not finished... 35%(roughly) done
I no the scene select doesnt work :)
here u go:
http://www.swfup.com/file/MTA1NDU2#viewragingrasengan2Posts: 230
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View Profile Yea heres a kicking thing, im still working on completing the body, i usually work of the legs first then the rest of the body, i'll post the full body soon
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/3lW8G7Nn-1GlEtchPosts: 1,239
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View Profile NegaDrain-Needs work, one of my favorite songs though. haha. Anyway, the background doesn't fit the animation. It's too detailed. the sticks are ugly. You need a lot more practice. But it's ok. Keep working on basic movements, physics, easing, and anticipation, pretty much everything.
Ragingraengan-not bad, i really don't like line that much, but it was ok. Try making the size of the line thicker. Imo.
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I'm starting to agree with cicada about comeing to the beginner's section... ¬_¬
comments?
Karthago2Posts: 653
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View Profile I refuse to give a comment to your anim, 'cause you agree with cicada.
thats a huge sin!
EtchPosts: 1,239
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View Profile Kai, Terix.
It was sloppy.
And wobblt. Could use more easing and smoothness. Work more now.
Terix2Posts: 639
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View Profile wow, damn, I was sarcastic. jeez...
but thanks...