Beginners, post your Flash animations here.
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Dec 16, 2009 10:06 PM #525241
lol his fist is like draging him... i think you know to know how our eyes see things dark.. and easing much... the last punch i think u could have just cut out some frames to make it more powerful i guess. im not sure wat frame rate your using but im just going to assume its 24. if so make the figures limbs closer like much closer maybe... eh i jsut got back from breakdance and cwalk prcatice... ill say stuff later
Dec 17, 2009 11:10 AM #525373
Yea i mesed up but oh well i just have to keep on practicing =D
Dec 17, 2009 1:21 PM #525383
new test with wood
http://www.filebox.me/view/rp0sxjytj
http://www.filebox.me/view/rp0sxjytj
Dec 17, 2009 1:29 PM #525386
You're great at attack moves. The sounds could be better, and slight wobbliness.
Dec 17, 2009 1:40 PM #525388
The wobbliness is because I animate with my mouse, but I'l try to make it smother.
Dec 17, 2009 1:45 PM #525389
Robecor you're pretty darn good, reminds me of Hyun. What are you still doing in this thread?
Dec 17, 2009 2:00 PM #525391
Well i thought I am still a beginner, that's why I am still doing tests animations
Dec 17, 2009 11:12 PM #525492
Dec 18, 2009 1:45 AM #525535
you're using flash, stop animating like you're using Microsoft Powerpoint
Dec 18, 2009 2:22 AM #525546
CAN you animate using powerpoint? seriously. If you can, I was unaware of it.
now. for those who will actually offer constructive criticism, instead of putting people down, c&c plz
now. for those who will actually offer constructive criticism, instead of putting people down, c&c plz
Dec 18, 2009 3:36 AM #525554
Dude no offense but your stick people kinda of suck there like skinny body and an horizontal oval as a head
Dec 18, 2009 4:12 AM #525561
I haven't played with line thickness. Haven't seen the point.
Ive seen a ton of animations. the sticks vary, yes. some are at about 0.25 thickness, or 0.5 thickness, or 2 thickness. yes, most have circular heads. for some reason its just a bitch about it. now, any other complaints, and maybe something that might help me improve?
if ya want I can start picking yours apart, btw. Not just things like easing, and physics, but facts like resizing and opinion based "I don't like this because it's not done one specific way that I choose to use" statements
Ive seen a ton of animations. the sticks vary, yes. some are at about 0.25 thickness, or 0.5 thickness, or 2 thickness. yes, most have circular heads. for some reason its just a bitch about it. now, any other complaints, and maybe something that might help me improve?
if ya want I can start picking yours apart, btw. Not just things like easing, and physics, but facts like resizing and opinion based "I don't like this because it's not done one specific way that I choose to use" statements
Dec 18, 2009 4:26 AM #525564
Quote from robecorWell i thought I am still a beginner, that's why I am still doing tests animations
dude you can totally post outside here. Go ahead
Dec 18, 2009 5:02 AM #525576
Quote from b0mbI haven't played with line thickness. Haven't seen the point.
Okay... your movie was way to slow...
The talking could of been way faster for the amount of action you showed.
Try and make movements more fluent, and the heads on your figures were a little strange.
I just overall think your animation was frightening...
Sorry I can't be more constructive...
Dec 19, 2009 12:12 AM #525744
Its running at 24 fps, but I see your point. I'll speed the text up, get things going faster. And the reason there isn't much action is I just haven't gotten around to it yet (mostly due to lack of time).