Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Apr 5, 2010 1:41 PM #564188
Hey, thanks Mcstick. I added the blood because,well, I just wanted to add it. :)
@dfr179:You should really put a head but it's a very nice animation. The left leg doesn't really move and the body too. Anyways its great.
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Apr 5, 2010 10:01 PM #564365
Okay, thought I would go back to basics, here is a ball, bouncing, let me know if the gravity seems off please, thank you.

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1270501843

I think it goes a little too high on the second bounce but other than that, to me it seems okay.
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Apr 5, 2010 11:23 PM #564401
Coldzero- Np. Keep working.
Dfr- Choppy but overall pretty good.
Digi- It starts going up I like that it keep good movement the last bounces were a little off but nice job overall. Your gravity is ok. Spacing is a little off the farther down it goes the faster it goes. For example.
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Apr 6, 2010 9:50 AM #564604
Okay, thank you, it was supposed to go up at the start as I can't really see many times when a ball would just drop, it would more likely be thrown or otherwise projected upwards.

It is supposed to speed up as it gets further down because obviously it's gaining momentum.
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Apr 6, 2010 12:20 PM #564657
It is but I didn't see very much of that in the animation. I see what you mean.

PS- What FPS are you using?
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Apr 6, 2010 4:50 PM #564740
I used 24 FPS on that animation but lower on the earlier ones.
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Apr 6, 2010 5:09 PM #564747
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I am loving it right now. Keep it up.
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Apr 6, 2010 5:20 PM #564749
Most recent anims: http://filebox.me/view/dtsivedw2 http://filebox.me/view/s7ueins7g
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Apr 6, 2010 7:44 PM #564792
Once I find a way to post my animations from school I'll be posting here. :D
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Apr 6, 2010 9:20 PM #564834
Okay, I made this short animation, if you guys think it's okay so far I'll continue it, it's running at 24 FPS and apart from the arms going a bit dodgy at the start it looks okay to me. If you guys think it looks okay so far I will make the guy with the gun fire more than 1 bullet at the start, I just thought that if you guys think the main character doesn't look right then there was no point putting a ton of effort into the sideshow.

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1270585608

Also, you can't really see it at that zoom, but I did put some fragments of the wall and bullet breaking off, I will change that later if you guys think it's worth the effort.
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Apr 6, 2010 11:22 PM #564883
Kingsmash- DAMN thats some nice work. Except one has 4 kicks instead of 3 and the moves are in the wrong order I see nothing wrong with it. And the pauses are annoying. The flip on the second one is a little off, the stick moved up.
Ghostly- Looking forward to it.
Digichris- I feel you got ahead of yourself completely. The characters barely move you switched tools and it was very lacking in force and any other sort of thing. Bullet was to slow. The man who shot was just transformed a little. The blue stick is very wiggly and thats all I really got.
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Apr 7, 2010 5:13 PM #565217
I know that the red guys legs go way too fast, the blue guys legs go dodgy when he gets hit and the motion trail looks wierd, but I was mainly trying to get the punch to look half decent.

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1270657273

I used Hyun's combat tutorial to make it.
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Apr 7, 2010 7:47 PM #565240
Digichris, Don't draw necks, unless you're drawing a ****ing giraffe.
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Apr 7, 2010 7:59 PM #565247
Huh, never noticed that no one uses necks in their animations before...

Thank you.
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Apr 7, 2010 8:03 PM #565251
Well, pretty much nobody draws necks, Just doesn't look to "well"
Look, one looks odd, and the other looks cool:
http://www.truploader.com/view/340481

But well, The animation is just.. bad. But everyone started like that and when you make more animations you will get alot better :). Good you posted in the beginner section!