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Sep 10, 2012 8:14 AM #737119
Quote from HollowEyes
Here's my first animation in a long time.
Just a simple run cycle. Constructive criticism would be appreciated.
http://www.fileize.com/view/5bb4b14e-695/


I'm not an expert or anything but... Stick figures are supposed to represent real human beings. Now, I don't know about you, but I've never seen a real human being move his arms like that lol. But yeah... His legs look pretty good. His head should be bouncing up and down, not side to side. That's all I can think of. :)
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Sep 11, 2012 4:35 AM #737541
Quote from HollowEyes
Here's my first animation in a long time.
http://www.fileize.com/view/5bb4b14e-695/
Truth be told, I found it hard to do a run cycle. I had to switch up between multiple drawing styles before I got the hang of this one.
The arms are really bad, the legs don't look too bad, but overall it's very stiff.


the upper part of his body is shaking .

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This is my second ever stick animation. You don't want to see my first. :P http://www.fileize.com/files/43e084f5/ad4/Blue_Vs.swf


yeah it looks great for a second animation, u just need to work on your moves realism and the body structure of the sticks you might have to add some frames.
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Sep 11, 2012 5:17 AM #737546
lol thats way better than my 2nd animation :3 good job
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Sep 11, 2012 11:22 AM #737666
Here's my third animation, a test with "practice dummy's" http://www.fileize.com/view/f2244891-7a0/
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Sep 11, 2012 7:22 PM #737830
A fairly minimalistic animation with alot of movements :)
http://www.fileize.com/view/c3fe4143-877/
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Sep 11, 2012 8:33 PM #737848
hello people in this thread um here is my animation please uh give me some tips much appreciated http://www.fileize.com/view/78e8f9b9-123/
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Sep 12, 2012 4:29 PM #738179
Just posting an animation

http://www.fileize.com/view/e589413b-e76/
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Sep 16, 2012 11:43 AM #740486
I would give some feedback if I knew what to say.
Here is an animation I made today.
I'm a beginner so don't laugh.
http://www.fileize.com/view/4f223e23-5f3/
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Sep 17, 2012 1:27 AM #740962
Hello. I have some recent-old anims which require some comments and criticism from you guys here :D

A fight scene from a project I started from 2010 (Which explains why the style is so bad) which I'm trying to continue.
http://www.fileize.com/view/917f9a5b-a60/

Spike arm thing
http://www.fileize.com/view/40cf41f2-76a/

Effects and angles test?
http://www.fileize.com/view/1f000ce3-e31/

Spike Shield test
http://www.fileize.com/view/2c15b929-565/

Hello.
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Sep 17, 2012 1:57 AM #740968
http://www.fileize.com/view/4f223e23-5f3/
I would like some advice please.
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Sep 18, 2012 12:56 PM #741877
Image OK…I am Chinese, and I also like sitckman.This is my exercise,How do you feel?
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Sep 19, 2012 8:27 AM #742363
http://www.fileize.com/view/7a88d4a4-379/
word from the mutha.
this sucks.
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Sep 19, 2012 8:30 AM #742366
spanned, that was awesome, it doesn't stink, it's awesome
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Sep 19, 2012 7:47 PM #742599
http://www.fileize.com/view/9b6f4a48-3dd/
My very first flash animation
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Sep 20, 2012 8:28 AM #742892
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spanned, that was awesome, it doesn't stink, it's awesome

Thanks, I mean I know this itself isn't bad but compared to other things.
Here's something else.
http://www.fileize.com/view/686bf702-acb/

http://www.fileize.com/view/cfb74ea7-26b/

http://www.fileize.com/view/bfe3dfd9-7a6/

Another

http://www.fileize.com/view/66731857-7c5/

http://www.fileize.com/view/2628d3a9-b28/

http://www.fileize.com/view/a568cb80-43c/

http://www.fileize.com/view/de824f46-b05/
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