Beginners, post your Flash animations here.
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BeocroPosts: 3
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View Profile Here's my first animation in a long time.
Just a simple run cycle. Constructive criticism would be appreciated.
http://www.fileize.com/view/5bb4b14e-695/
I'm not an expert or anything but... Stick figures are supposed to represent real human beings. Now, I don't know about you, but I've never seen a real human being move his arms like that lol. But yeah... His legs look pretty good. His head should be bouncing up and down, not side to side. That's all I can think of. :)
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View Profile Here's my first animation in a long time.
http://www.fileize.com/view/5bb4b14e-695/
Truth be told, I found it hard to do a run cycle. I had to switch up between multiple drawing styles before I got the hang of this one.
The arms are really bad, the legs don't look too bad, but overall it's very stiff.
the upper part of his body is shaking .
This is my second ever stick animation. You don't want to see my first. :P
http://www.fileize.com/files/43e084f5/ad4/Blue_Vs.swf
yeah it looks great for a second animation, u just need to work on your moves realism and the body structure of the sticks you might have to add some frames.
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View Profile lol thats way better than my 2nd animation :3 good job
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View Profile Here's my third animation, a test with "practice dummy's"
http://www.fileize.com/view/f2244891-7a0/DaSirPosts: 91
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View Profile A fairly minimalistic animation with alot of movements :)
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View Profile hello people in this thread um here is my animation please uh give me some tips much appreciated
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View Profile I would give some feedback if I knew what to say.
Here is an animation I made today.
I'm a beginner so don't laugh.
http://www.fileize.com/view/4f223e23-5f3/ScarPosts: 286
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View Profile Hello. I have some recent-old anims which require some comments and criticism from you guys here :D
A fight scene from a project I started from 2010 (Which explains why the style is so bad) which I'm trying to continue.
http://www.fileize.com/view/917f9a5b-a60/
Spike arm thing
http://www.fileize.com/view/40cf41f2-76a/
Effects and angles test?
http://www.fileize.com/view/1f000ce3-e31/
Spike Shield test
http://www.fileize.com/view/2c15b929-565/
Hello.
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OK…I am Chinese, and I also like sitckman.This is my exercise,How do you feel?
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View Profile spanned, that was awesome, it doesn't stink, it's awesome
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