Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Max Vador
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Nov 19, 2012 2:59 PM #791934
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Also, you're lacking force D:. The force thing is very annoying, it takes a while to get and fully understand how to animate it, at least for me... it took me


terkoiz made a nice tutorial on force on youtube bless his heart
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Nov 19, 2012 7:24 PM #792060
Hey guys there ya go my first decent animation so far: http://www.fileize.com/view/9bae6451-3a8/
Haven't worked on sound and reactions yet. I've tried doing reactions but it turned out very badly so I deleted it because i ran out of days on my flash trial.
Any constructive criticism is much appreciated :)
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Nov 19, 2012 7:39 PM #792082
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Whoa! :) I agree with Max Vador. @ Insentparanoia, LMAO (OMG you turned into a midget) The animation looked fine to me, just need to work with your stickman construction or make your brush a bit smoother, maybe 45? Also, you're lacking force D:. The force thing is very annoying, it takes a while to get and fully understand how to animate it, at least for me... it took me


Thanks. Actually, I had the bruss on 0 smooth... And I know my attacks lack force D: Also, I don't know how to make combos, I just don't know how to link attacks...

terkoiz made a nice tutorial on force on youtube bless his heart


Found the video! Thanks!



Ok, going to watch Terkoiz's force tutorial.
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Nov 19, 2012 8:31 PM #792131
hey guys i just begun animating today and here's my first try on a running animation. http://www.fileize.com/files/9cf5b610/a75/Run1.swf I'm waiting for all kinds of critique
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Nov 19, 2012 9:14 PM #792167
more frames and a higher framerate.

looks like you've got the hang of it, but you have a lot of chop as well.

a run cycle should be about 5 frames. 3 frames going forward and up, and 2 going down.

[swf=http://www.fileize.com/files/5606e5c6/9a0/testtt.swf]width=550 height=400[/swf]
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Nov 19, 2012 9:25 PM #792172
so 5 frames for running ok. thanks for the advice. i will try to improve it and post the result
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Nov 20, 2012 3:07 AM #792412
just take whatever I, or anyone else says as a guideline. do things the way you like, but don't forget to listen when help is provided
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Nov 21, 2012 9:31 PM #794027
ok so here's a (hopefully) improved animation
http://www.filz.us/87L

how do you find it?
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Nov 21, 2012 9:41 PM #794035
looks good. i'd redraw the crouch rather than just scaling it.
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Nov 21, 2012 9:45 PM #794039
thanks for the tip. i admit i was lazy at that part but you got me :p
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Nov 21, 2012 9:50 PM #794040
another thing to consider is when he's airwalking trying to land on the ledge, it's a bit much. cut it down about half
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Nov 22, 2012 2:06 AM #794156
http://i.minus.com/ibirsooKJn8wtB.gif

This is the first real thing I've ever done, complete with heads and someone else actually being punched. :P This is what I have so far.
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Nov 22, 2012 2:00 PM #794471
CnC?
http://www.fileize.com/view/137c7bb9-4e0/
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Nov 22, 2012 4:48 PM #794561
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another thing to consider is when he's airwalking trying to land on the ledge, it's a bit much. cut it down about half

my idea was to make it go from slow motion to normal speed but it didn't work out.

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seems good to me. i can't really say much.
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Nov 22, 2012 8:44 PM #794855
Mmk, I ended up finishing it. :D http://i.minus.com/iVVceJRldLSYJ.gif

Fairly proud of the result.