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First time coming through and I see Hoya's avatar... my day has been made, prepare the fireworks.


Thought I might CnC, here are just a few things that I saw that you could take under your belt.

First of all, your movements are pretty nice, although the quality varies slightly (like that double framing though, some movements really do look better that way!). The jump done by Graid was nice, and so was the retraction of the arms and the speed of the spikes appearing. Once you get into the action, it starts getting a little sloppy and isn't set a at a good pace, so beware:

All the build up only to have Graid run at Knot so slowly makes it feel a little disappointing (really awesome tentacle arms though). I'd work on the part with Graid punching Knot and throwing him down a bit more, it feels rushed, is hard to follow, and lacks fluidity. Try adding in a few more in betweens or drawing the movements with a bit more clarity. The bounce of Knot hitting the ground as well, an inbetween or two and/or more clarity would make it look a bit better.

Other than that, I like how it's turning out, the angle isn't straight from the side (at a more diagonal angle from above) so there's a bit of depth and you seem to be getting the basics. One more thing that might make it more interesting for the future is to make Blacklight move a little, like dodging back to avoid and moving to a different spot to attack Knot or intercept the Pink Dude (not saying you weren't planning on it, you've probably only worked on Graid and Knot's fighting at this point). That's all I have, hope it helped a little!