My First Flash
my second flash
Effects
Combo 1
combo 2

http://filz.us/LyH

please its my first animation just dont go too hard if its bad like"FUCKING HORRIBLE! STOP ANIMATING" plz. Give me some feedback thanks :D

Sup! Just thought I'd ask if I could get some criticism on this http://lonewolfpro9.deviantart.com/art/Stick-test-animation-384405892 if any of you could that'd be great! : D

Quote from Stickmanias

thanks..


woobly, need to easing

attacking-movement-001_stickmaniaz.swf
http://sta.sh/02g7ximjtpz6

Nice. Though the stop-motion (i think it's stop-motion) stuff isn't necessary right now, because it makes it harder for people to judge the anim quality. And I still urge you to practice more basics, basics are for everyone. =)

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Sooo here's my first crack at flash. A short 3 hit chain. Took 5 hours. u_u
http://lewierdo.deviantart.com/art/1st-Combo-380519293

Alright Stickpage... Come at me.

Very nice. Though you'll find you'll learn almost all aspects of animation much faster if you practice simple physics tests.

Quote from Xus

http://www.filz.us/view/cb782bf7-1f0/
There it is, my first animation. Really short, had to use my own prefences because like i said not good enough tutorials out there... But i'll try taking Saintorin's advice next time.

That's not too bad. As always, try some simple stuff, physics like The Bouncing Ball (that is a ball, bouncing.)

Quote from Nateur360

It's my first animation: http://www.filz.us/view/b4fddb0e-420/ Comment please!
Second animation: http://www.filz.us/view/ed19b2f4-dd1/
Third animation: http://www.filz.us/view/55d220aa-012/
Sword test with Nex (32 fps): http://www.filz.us/view/ad724f22-9a5/

Good for first anims, just practice basics.

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heres my second animation:

[video=youtube;GOHgP3PyY4I]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GOHgP3PyY4I[/*video]

Nice, the yellow background wash a bit harsh though, it makes it hard to see the animation well. For the anim itself, use less frames for the fast movements, and more frames for the slower movements and practice basics.

Quote from Staedz

http://filz.us/LyH

please its my first animation just dont go too hard if its bad like"FUCKING HORRIBLE! STOP ANIMATING" plz. Give me some feedback thanks :D

Not bad, especially for a first, but I think Xiao Xiao needs to wait. xD All you need to do is just practice some basics. Bouncing ball, walk loops, run loops, etc.

Quote from LoneWolfProductions9

Sup! Just thought I'd ask if I could get some criticism on this http://lonewolfpro9.deviantart.com/art/Stick-test-animation-384405892 if any of you could that'd be great! : D

Impressive. On the run part, use less frames because it seemed a bit too slow. Please practice run loops and post them till you get it just right.

If you can't find your reply here, really all you need to know is Basics. xD

2nd flash animation.
Epic resizing issues. XD
Click here to view.

First big project http://filz.us/Mm6

This is my first flash animation, trying out lightning and one explosion at the end.

http://www.filz.us/files/d5bc38d9/99c/Effects.swf

I'm certainly open to any criticism.

This is one of my animations though it's unfinished http://www.filz.us/view/7c0f5a03-1a7/
I'm open to constructive criticisms.

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2nd flash animation.
Epic resizing issues. XD
Click here to view.

I can't actually see the anim, but resizing is one of my biggest problems. Try animating headfirst, it helped me quite a bit.

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First big project http://filz.us/Mm6

Quote from poisonchocolate

This is my first flash animation, trying out lightning and one explosion at the end.

http://www.filz.us/files/d5bc38d9/99c/Effects.swf

I'm certainly open to any criticism.

Nice. Just that the explosion at the end looked a bit more like pieces breaking apart than a fluid explosion. Try doing explosions like this or this. It's a bit advanced though.

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This is one of my animations though it's unfinished http://www.filz.us/view/7c0f5a03-1a7/
I'm open to constructive criticisms.

Good fluidity, backgrounds, effects, shadows and stuff.

This is my first animation!

http://www.filz.us/files/c7f30025/703/Mai_First_ainm.swf

Tell me what you think.:p

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9MvggwDVE-k my 3rd animation

Hey all... Here's what I've come up with..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SjdInCqezaI
Thanks, please make comments on this.

This is one of my first animations at 24 fps (if you alredy saw this in the general community animations section, sorry I send that and then saw this thread) So yeah any help would be good :)

http://www.filz.us/view/49123410-b80/

Thanks! :D

This is my Entry for the run collab
SWF:http://www.filz.us/files/05613766/d75/Run_C0llab_Fuzzybrain.swf
I open to constructive critsim;)

Thought i didn't make it:(