Hello everybody, I am a newcomer to flash and would like criticism. These are my first two complete animations.:)

http://www.filz.us/view/b9554de1-da0/ That pig thing was made by my brother after the fact :eek: never knew it was there lol

http://www.filz.us/view/f1ad4965-050/

No hiatus to my toil. =)

Quote from Fuzzybrain

This is my first animation!

http://www.filz.us/files/c7f30025/703/Mai_First_ainm.swf

Tell me what you think.:p

Not bad. Here's my advice, take that ball that you keep doing stuff with and just bounce it up and down. Believe it or not you will learn much faster that way than to do the complicated stuff you're doing now.

Quote from Erniiii

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9MvggwDVE-k my 3rd animation

Pretty fascinating, but try doing pure motion only, not too much cinematics and stuff just yet. You are a very interesting artist. =)

Quote from Clifford60

Hey all... Here's what I've come up with..
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SjdInCqezaI
Thanks, please make comments on this.

Amazing.

Quote from Gogoh

This is one of my first animations at 24 fps (if you alredy saw this in the general community animations section, sorry I send that and then saw this thread) So yeah any help would be good :)

http://www.filz.us/view/49123410-b80/

Thanks! :D

Try more frames and less difference between each frame and try using the line tool to draw instead of brush. And practice basics.

Quote from Fuzzybrain

This is my Entry for the run collab
SWF:http://www.filz.us/files/05613766/d75/Run_C0llab_Fuzzybrain.swf
I open to constructive critsim;)

Thought i didn't make it:(

Same about the line tool. And basics.

EDIT: Testing 3d anglyph =) http://www.filz.us/files/9fba0e15/ebc/anaglyph.swf (sorry for the bad anim quality, I'm time crunched. xP)

First practice on attacking! Also testing effects and audio.

http://www.filz.us/files/4186ec7a/1a3/Combo.swf

Here Is My First Animation Combo Sequence

Quote from errmooop0

First practice on attacking! Also testing effects and audio.

http://www.filz.us/files/4186ec7a/1a3/Combo.swf

Work on easing before you dive into effects.

Quote from Raptor Blu

Here Is My First Animation Combo Sequence

Very nice, how long have you been animating? I'd still suggest that you do some more basic animations even if you've been animating a year though, lol. Very good non-lazy reactions.

Quote from AaronIsNeato

Work on easing before you dive into effects.

=)

Quote from Hoya

Very nice, how long have you been animating? I'd still suggest that you do some more basic animations even if you've been animating a year though, lol. Very good non-lazy reactions.

=)

Wow, Thank You. I Have Only Been Animating For About 3 Weeks Actually, Still Really Tedious And Discouraging At Times, Please, Could You Let Me Know What I Should Practice As Far As "Basic Animations" Im Anxious To Animate But I Just Dont Know What!!!

Been some time since I've been here. What's up?

Zero gimme some critique on my anim:
http://sta.sh/01sxpm4j6yhc

Its probably the most recent thing ive mated, im trying to get back into the game, so I need some proper guidance.

Quote from Zero

Been some time since I've been here. What's up?

"It is not so bad, you will only feel a long and painful burning after this!"

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"It is not so bad, you will only feel a long and painful burning after this!"

Too bad

Hey,really nice there

Quote from Raptor Blu

Wow, Thank You. I Have Only Been Animating For About 3 Weeks Actually, Still Really Tedious And Discouraging At Times, Please, Could You Let Me Know What I Should Practice As Far As "Basic Animations" Im Anxious To Animate But I Just Dont Know What!!!

Your welcome, and you've learned very quickly then. =) By basic animations I mean walk loops and and run loops, I'll edit this with an example soon, and physics practices of anticipation (the movement before the movement, heh) easing, and recoil. Doing these with just a ball is easiest. Also, CnC mean Comments and Critique.

Quote from Zero

Been some time since I've been here. What's up?

Zero! =DDDDDDDDDDDDD

Heyo Hoya! You should go to #Dispatch in IRC. I'm always there everyday.