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Aug 8, 2014 4:17 PM #1229417
If this is really your first then it's pretty decent. It's a little fast, though. Like, if you don't look at the frames individually, you barely notice the black sticks counter-kick. Slow things down/ put more frames into it. If its a fast movement it needs more frames to properly show the movement, keep that in mind...
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Aug 8, 2014 6:40 PM #1229465
Thanks, I'll try to keep that in mind.

Not my first animation, I'm just kind of new to the forums.
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Aug 15, 2014 10:00 AM #1232384
i haven't animated in six months and that probably shows here

http://sta.sh/0j0hwkv8f9w
http://sta.sh/0aptgl8hq1e
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Aug 29, 2014 1:53 AM #1237909
First flash vid. No sounds and kinda (okay VERY) sloppy stick drawings, but I was mostly focusing on trying to get a handle on the program and trying out things like duble-framing and the v-cam. What do you guys think? Also, any and all advice on smoothing out the animations, slow-mo, and recommended sounds would be appreciated. As would advice about the obvious mistake at the end with the background. >.>

This took me about 4 hours btw...

http://www.filz.us/files/43d469b7/419/Test_Drive.swf
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Aug 29, 2014 5:05 AM #1238013
Quote from tayboski
First flash vid. No sounds and kinda (okay VERY) sloppy stick drawings, but I was mostly focusing on trying to get a handle on the program and trying out things like duble-framing and the v-cam. What do you guys think? Also, any and all advice on smoothing out the animations, slow-mo, and recommended sounds would be appreciated. As would advice about the obvious mistake at the end with the background. >.>

This took me about 4 hours btw...

http://www.filz.us/files/43d469b7/419/Test_Drive.swf


Don't worry about how it took dude, that comes later if you want to go professional. Your goal should be to focus on learning the 12 principle before jumping straight into stick fights. It's something all the best have learnt and mastered and applied to their work.

Sloppy drawings is something that'll fix itself over time once you've trained your arm to draw properly.
I'd say for now don't worry about vcam and if you do use it you'll want to tween it with subtle movement across the screen, and add 1-2 frames of shake when the hits connect.
To smooth your animations you've got to add more frames between movements and keep the drawings clean and accurate to stop wobbling and shakiness.
Double framing I'd say is a more advanced technique to replace easing, so get a hold of easing in and out of movements first and then play around with it. If you double drame wrong you get unexpected results, you have to know when to use it. For example I animate a lot on doubles, use singles for fast movements and sometimes use triples for slower stuff.
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Aug 29, 2014 4:15 PM #1238143
Quote from Mack
Don't worry about how it took dude, that comes later if you want to go professional. Your goal should be to focus on learning the 12 principle before jumping straight into stick fights. It's something all the best have learnt and mastered and applied to their work.

Sloppy drawings is something that'll fix itself over time once you've trained your arm to draw properly.
I'd say for now don't worry about vcam and if you do use it you'll want to tween it with subtle movement across the screen, and add 1-2 frames of shake when the hits connect.
To smooth your animations you've got to add more frames between movements and keep the drawings clean and accurate to stop wobbling and shakiness.
Double framing I'd say is a more advanced technique to replace easing, so get a hold of easing in and out of movements first and then play around with it. If you double drame wrong you get unexpected results, you have to know when to use it. For example I animate a lot on doubles, use singles for fast movements and sometimes use triples for slower stuff.


First of all, thank you for the critique and the advice Mack! :D

Understood and noted except for one thing; what is "the 12 principle"? :D
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Aug 30, 2014 1:32 AM #1238270
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First of all, thank you for the critique and the advice Mack! :D

Understood and noted except for one thing; what is "the 12 principle"? :D


http://the12principles.tumblr.com/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHfDEsNLg34

You master these 12 things and you become the best.
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Aug 30, 2014 1:41 AM #1238275
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http://the12principles.tumblr.com/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHfDEsNLg34

You master these 12 things and you become the best.


is this the mack or someone who just has that same name
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Aug 30, 2014 4:01 AM #1238309
This is the one and only
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Aug 30, 2014 2:40 PM #1238440
Quote from Mack
http://the12principles.tumblr.com/

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bHfDEsNLg34

You master these 12 things and you become the best.


Thanks Mack! I shall begin studying these principles immediately! ^^
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Sep 1, 2014 6:48 AM #1239009
This is like my first animation. Maybe I took it too far by trying to add fire but I had an RHG character in mind while creating it. I realize now it will be way harder to bring him to life than I thought xD.

Now... Bring on the Critique

~Yes camera shake was bad

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5NmKQu_dtro
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Sep 1, 2014 11:19 PM #1239173
Here is my first fight scene. Please give constructive criticism, I know a lot of things are wrong with it.

http://sta.sh/0nnou4ldes7
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Sep 2, 2014 12:43 AM #1239210
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Sep 2, 2014 2:03 PM #1239412
Quote from charlieatron
Here is my first fight scene. Please give constructive criticism, I know a lot of things are wrong with it.

http://sta.sh/0nnou4ldes7


isn't that sound supposed to be a gunshot instead of hits?
btw it's pretty rezized.
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Sep 7, 2014 9:53 AM #1241028
I wouldn't say I'm a beginner but its such a short snippet I don't think a thread is necessary.
Please tell me what you think.

http://www.filz.us/view/70e154f7-4b3/
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