Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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killastick
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Jan 28, 2007 10:14 PM #22072

O.O wow, some good stuff going here.

To TheOneAndOnly: Good begginer flash there, it has some good particles and differant things going on, maybe try to add more movment to the characters?

And Trvi: Really great particles there good flash, but if the guys on a slanted slope wont the head roll down the hill :D?

Keep ups the Goods Works Peeps!

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Jan 28, 2007 11:27 PM #22075

http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=firstof5.gif
My first ever...I know i suck

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Jan 29, 2007 12:12 AM #22076

[url=http://www.swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=5097]View my swf file![/url

here it is kinda crapy tho my first one <.<

chipmunk man
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Jan 29, 2007 12:34 AM #22077

View my swf file!
Fixed your link and i think thats pivot plus they dont move

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Jan 29, 2007 7:12 AM #22097

Quote from chipmunk man

My first ever...I know i suck

Sticks look better without their necks. For your smoke the shading looks off. I think you should try a higher frame rate. Also I didn't get what was going on. It's a good start for a first keep it up.

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Jan 29, 2007 11:39 AM #22101

boo i suck
http://www.swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=5060

chipmunk man
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Jan 29, 2007 5:02 PM #22115

View my swf file!
Mouse follow test

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Jan 29, 2007 5:43 PM #22117

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boo i suck
http://www.swfup.com/swf-view.php?id=5060

Way better than me

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Jan 29, 2007 6:03 PM #22120

hehe i just made this for the hell of it...
i made it in study hall.

http://img444.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ouchhn8.swf

its stupid i know lol...

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Jan 29, 2007 6:58 PM #22124

Quote from oxide
its stupid i know lol...

Yeah very too and make his arms bend it was kinda weird... 6.5/10

sandwich

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Jan 29, 2007 8:47 PM #22134

I don't understand the like, rating system here. How does this like 2 second animation get a 6.5/10 and like animations that take a few hours to make can somehow get the same rank?

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Jan 29, 2007 8:58 PM #22137

http://img299.imageshack.us/my.php?image=saberwarstp3.swf

This is only my second so sorry if not that good :)

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Jan 30, 2007 3:15 AM #22160

The rating system is based on people I guess. Some people grade differently then others.

@theoneandonly - The arms changed constantly, and sticks look better without necks. The leg was bent the whole time, so change that. Pretty good for a second.

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Jan 30, 2007 5:39 AM #22162

i'm hella new here and i animate ok but somtimes it looks like pure crap,i need some mager help...i barely know how to use flash and my uncle Doug just gave me the program and i needed to figure out how to use myself,i did ok but i really need help....

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Jan 30, 2007 1:03 PM #22166

Tutorial section?