Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Kenagi

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Aug 12, 2007 12:56 AM #50759
thats the one lol. awsome hehe. deffinatly the last one
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Aug 12, 2007 12:59 AM #50760
lol Ok the last one it is =] Any ideas for what could happen next? anyone lol it seems to be kenagi only posting lol
Kenagi

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Aug 12, 2007 1:05 AM #50763
next.. well if u want to continue they guy could come back as a zombie... but then u would have to do the hole and blood on his face every frame unless u made a seperate layer for it.
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Aug 12, 2007 1:13 AM #50766
I think it'd be cool if his best friend/ son came in to avenge his death.
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Aug 12, 2007 1:16 AM #50767
Ok.... he is going to turn into a zombie and then once the zombie is *obliterated* which I use with precaution lol.... his son will come in and *try* to avenge his death in 1 way or another, but the fight wont always be onesided, to give more suspense. How about that?
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Aug 12, 2007 1:23 AM #50768
would be good. im looking forward to it lol
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Aug 12, 2007 1:29 AM #50770
Well I will try to get on here at 12:00 p.m tomorrow after I pack my suitcases because i'm going on holiday to turkey lol so keep me posted with p.ms kenagi about this forum plz because I will only have time to have a quick glance at my msgs while i'm on holiday lol. OK i'm going, thanks for the help,support and ideas mates =]

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sorry for spam people :| :D
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Aug 12, 2007 2:22 AM #50781
Here is my most recent attempt at a punch. I was originally going to make a guy recoil from the blow, but it looked stupid. So, the guy is just punching air. What do you guys think?

http://www.swfupload.com/view/112183.htm
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Aug 12, 2007 9:54 AM #50853
It was good,really good,it was smooth,but it was a bit choppy.
Good job man.You are Med beginner I think.
Kenagi

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Aug 12, 2007 12:43 PM #50864
it was good. but when he had finished the puch if he was putting any effor into it atall he should bend forward and folow the punch to some extent instead of just stick his arm out, and if not he should recoil the punch quicker. however it was very smooth. nothing wrong with the animation just what you where animateing hehe

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Re-posting my last video cus ive had no responce and i realy want to know weather ive made a beter job of this one.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=j7sb0psUWG8

hehe lol sorry if this counts as spam
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Aug 12, 2007 1:22 PM #50872
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Godofdarkness, here is an example of what you should try for next time. You should also heed Kenagi's advice (maybe I could use it too). The ball is a bit heavy, though.

http://www.swfupload.com/view/106253.htm

I was going to try and describe what seemed wrong with yours in words, but making this anim was much easier.

Thanks for the example :)

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on the bounce where it goes up quite abit. it goes up to much and also u eased it going up which makes it look wrong, so on that "high" bounce lower it, use less frames and dont ease upwards.

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also unless u wher going for slow motion the drops should be much quicker for the first 2 bits til the lil bounces lol.

thinks for the info :)
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Aug 12, 2007 2:14 PM #50883
Hey, the punch was very good I think but it was a bit slow, try to make the punch itself over less frames to give a quick, powerful effect. Also, lyk kenagi said try and lean into the punch more and it will look alot mroe powerful, but it depends on the situation your punching in, so it was very good =]
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Aug 12, 2007 3:02 PM #50901
Wel, this is a beginners thread, so we're gettin better and please dont spam like that unless you have feedbakc, advice or animations to offer =]
Feisar

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Aug 12, 2007 3:29 PM #50907
First stick fight
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Kenagi, could you be my mentor? I really want to get to your level.

Oh yeah, when i use flash i have to redraw every thing in each different frame, someone told me i had to use symbols to do other wise, what are symbols?
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Aug 12, 2007 3:42 PM #50909
It was good,for first time making stick fight,but read tuts,and practice more..
This is the only one thing,which can make you better at animating..