Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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unique
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Sep 18, 2007 3:18 PM #59050

Gee thanks for the opinion. >_>
I liked your animation though, 'twas ok, just needs easing.

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Sep 18, 2007 3:24 PM #59051

redo the course. Shorten it, make it more interesting, and all so that you can avoid trying to use shortcuts since there wont be any tedious parts of the animation.

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Sep 18, 2007 7:28 PM #59097

Running Thing
Improved walking test IMO.

And thanks to 2Pac.

C&C please.

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Sep 18, 2007 8:27 PM #59106

Here are some tests (haven't animated with flash in a while, and never used line tool)

Particle Test
View my swf file!

Punch Test
http://www.swfme.com/view/1158052

Walk Test
http://www.swfme.com/view/1170672

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Sep 19, 2007 8:36 AM #59189

http://www.swfme.com/view/1082642

A-nother animation.

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Sep 19, 2007 1:16 PM #59197

the particles were nice,but and the stick moves kinda smooth,make something longer where we can see more =)

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Sep 19, 2007 1:20 PM #59198

Quote from unique
http://www.swfme.com/view/1082642

A-nother animation.

well it was pretty smooth.. but the crack on the ground wasnt realistic it's to thick, you should change it to a thinner size

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Sep 20, 2007 12:24 PM #59334

http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-28526.swf my first animation i know its terrible but iv never used flash or any program like this n i dont know any of the tools so yeh

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Sep 20, 2007 1:08 PM #59336

As I said on the thread: I can help you if you want. MSN?
*Im desperate, so friggin' boring here....*

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Sep 20, 2007 2:14 PM #59338

My first posted animations! =D

feedback plz...

http://www.swfup.com/file/28543

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Sep 20, 2007 3:11 PM #59343

Darkebrz: That was good, especially the particles. But in the end you got lazy and skipped some frames. Don't do that. (atleast I think you did...)
The walking was to short to be rated.
The punches was good but dont overdo V-Cam shakes and blur, it makes it look bad.

Unique: Good work. Now get on msn.

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Sep 20, 2007 8:10 PM #59371

Ok,first of all,i cant see most of the swf anims,second,when i try to download flash 8 trial on google,its taks me to flash cs3 or whatver,and thaqts a buisness graugh,so if you could give me a link to the trial plz

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Sep 21, 2007 4:51 AM #59464

http://www.filecram.com/swf/538853.htm
Ok this one was a tuffy, I put the anim at 20 fps, and it worked perfectly, right? I upload it at all these different places and it still comes out with slow fps. I thought making it smaller will help, I was wrong. HELP!

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Sep 21, 2007 5:08 AM #59466

lol leedon i would help but i have no idea about what to put it on etc:P but on ur animation:P omg haha why are you posting in the beginners section? that cant be beginner lol good work .

heres mine .. yep i suck second attempt
http://www.swfup.com/uploads/swf-28674.swf

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Sep 21, 2007 3:48 PM #59494

Cool. On your animation, when your animating, under the timelne, there are these numbers that tell you your current frame, fps, and ect. Dubble click the fps and it will allow you to change it. Make it higher. :D
WOW
My anim isn't supposed to be in the begginers section? Thats like my 5th anim, dude. I'll wait for someone else to tell me if it's supposed to be in here. 8)

Ok, I think I fixed it, all I had to do was up the fps to 24. I guess it was at 20 fps.
http://www.filecram.com/swf/581034.htm
The sounds may lag behind.