Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Satyr
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Dec 3, 2007 2:30 PM #70327
That was suckish. The blood is bad. Read some tutorials on that. Nice guns. Keep going and you'll be a pretty good animator in a few months.
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Dec 3, 2007 3:32 PM #70329
my second flash http://www.swfup.com/file/71399
Cai Johnson
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Dec 3, 2007 3:40 PM #70330
Turn on onion skin.
Work on"
-blood;
-easing;
-smothness;
-and th whole rest... +P
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Dec 3, 2007 4:03 PM #70331
cai that was pretty good....the only thing that was weird was the blood....mabye instead of blood put scorch marks where the dudes body used to be :D i say med-high beg
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Dec 3, 2007 4:58 PM #70332
Good cai .
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Dec 3, 2007 4:59 PM #70333
yeah, i rly like the beam.. nice one cai .. ;)
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Dec 3, 2007 5:16 PM #70336
Quote from Satyr
Hey, Cia Johnson, I think your low inter. Or high Beginner.


for heaves sake: NO! hes not.

i didnt like it... tha blast was with weird particles and too fat

the kick was weird... he didnt really touch him with it

here is an old anim but i just vcamed:

http://www.swfup.com/file/70636

(i am still practicing with it)


coulda get a comment now?!
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Dec 3, 2007 5:27 PM #70340
it was not bad,but he really could have hands...
Cai Johnson
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Dec 3, 2007 6:56 PM #70348
Quote from madhatter666
cai that was pretty good....the only thing that was weird was the blood....mabye instead of blood put scorch marks where the dudes body used to be :D i say med-high beg

Thx...

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Good cai .

Yeah thanks also

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for heaves sake: NO! hes not.

i didnt like it... tha blast was with weird particles and too fat

the kick was weird... he didnt really touch him with it


Yeah low intar is too high... but odcourse he didn't touch him! He jumps backward to not be touched. And why fat blasts are bad? Maybe he just got a lot of power?...
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Dec 3, 2007 8:36 PM #70354
i rushed seeing it^^ okay youre right he jumps backward...

what i ment with the blast is not, that its bad, but that it looks weird... maybe it should be small at his hand and get bigger the more it comes away from the "wizard" or what ever... dunno... there are many possibilities
and i noticed, that the particles werent that good... not bad but not good..

all in all it was pretty nice for a beginner.
sorry... hadnt got the time this midday =)
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Dec 3, 2007 9:19 PM #70359
I was actually just consentrating on the gun and gun animation, but my friend liked it so he told me to put it up here.

Just feedback on the gun please..

sleekupload.com/uploads/gun_1.swf Here is the gun.

The otheranimation was just made for experimenting. But thanks.
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Dec 3, 2007 9:58 PM #70366
http://www.swfup.com/file/71674 An explosion. Practicing particles.
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Dec 3, 2007 10:01 PM #70367
it was ok,but it seemed wierd.
What was that thing at the start of the explosion.
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Dec 3, 2007 10:01 PM #70368
It was nice but i dont get the opening when it is like a v...maybe add some color to it that would add to the effect..It fades out well and the particles are good.
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Dec 3, 2007 10:01 PM #70369
I didn't want the explosion to come from nowhere, so I put that there.