Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Shanto
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Jan 6, 2008 3:21 PM #76293
Sorry for double post...

I dunno if I posted these- but i'm going to now.

http://www.swfme.com/view/1081262 (Horrible resizing, sorreh)

http://www.swfme.com/view/1175112 (Supposed to resize)

http://www.swfme.com/view/1186592 (Really, really, REALLY, sucky.)
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Jan 6, 2008 11:29 PM #76435
Yet another run animation. http://www.swfme.com/view/1226472
C&C please.
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Jan 6, 2008 11:31 PM #76437
Looks pretty good. I didn't like the way the stick looked, to sloppy. The legs seemed to resize quite a bit .
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Jan 7, 2008 2:57 AM #76525
Shanto, when you walk do you hold your arms out straight?
I hope you dont, so dont make your sticks hold their arms out and not move them when they run.
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Jan 7, 2008 4:14 AM #76543
Shanto, work on running.
Devour, Sticks are a bit sloppy and when you run, let your leg extend all the way out.
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Jan 7, 2008 1:42 PM #76557
hi, thi sis my first and it is ac tually the first time ive posted a letter
http: // www . swfupload . com / view / 100417 . htm

(without the spaces)
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Jan 7, 2008 2:17 PM #76559
http://www.swfupload.com/view/100417.htm There you go.
Add more easing and movements. The movie was kind of boring. Good luck on your stay on spp.
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Jan 7, 2008 2:38 PM #76561
what a great waste of time badboysel

oh my gosh... the hardest waste of time ive ever seen.
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Jan 7, 2008 8:55 PM #76570
lol. i showed sel this forum, he goes to my school.
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Jan 7, 2008 8:56 PM #76571
Souleater, ease moar.
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Jan 7, 2008 9:22 PM #76572
its spelt more now moar.
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Jan 8, 2008 12:57 AM #76591
C&C plz.


http://www.swfme.com/view/1195202
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Jan 8, 2008 1:16 AM #76597
I like the style. Very cartoony. Explosion could use more particles. Also the stick looked weird at times.

But overall it was pretty good. If you keep improving you won't have to post in the beg section for much longer. :D
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Jan 8, 2008 1:54 AM #76604
Your getting there terix. Keep it up. Moar particles. Maybe make more animations on movements
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Jan 8, 2008 1:56 AM #76605
awsome! first time I'm almost getting permission to leave the beg section. thanks guys! :D