heres new one....
btw i didnt made these sticks 0.o

Quote from izacque

I'm sorry, but you didn't make those sticks.

WHAT THE HELL DOES THAT HAVE TO DO WITH THE ANIMATION?
just crit the animation, I don't make own sticks either. It's lame perhaps yes, but you judged him by sticks??? He never said it were his sticks!

Quote from majorgamer97

all of these except darth are mine

Try to do basics first before you make storylines. Storylines aren't bad, but it will only succeed if you have basics under control.
Try a punch, walk, run, and jump first.

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these are also not my sticks.but my anim is good

It lagged physics, it wasn't eased, it was choppy, make a floor line next time, so you can see where he should walk, now he's more sliding. Also it lagged force.

Quote from linemaniac231

my very first PIVOT animation. I have made ones in programs such as gimp though.

Ok..... should I even tell you what's wrong with your animation?
Or do you already know? If you do, don't post this crap next time.
It was choppy, uneased, stiff, slow, and weird. I suggest you work on basics first, like a walk cycle, k?

Quote from Sina

heres my new animation >.<

Mostly it lagged force, wich is essential with beams. It was a bit choppy and overall stiff.

Quote from Sina

heres new one....
btw i didnt made these sticks 0.o

It was very choppy in my few, idk. The blood was weird, because there were no particals. Try to ease everything next time


I CRITTED THESE FOR THERE WERE NO CONSTRUCTIVE CRITS FOR THEM!

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It was very choppy in my few, idk. The blood was weird, because there were no particals. Try to ease everything next time


I CRITTED THESE FOR THERE WERE NO CONSTRUCTIVE CRITS FOR THEM!

no particals couse blue man got killed with silenced pistol >.<
but mkay ._.

Even then you get particles. Also it seemed the blood came out of nowhere, It should be small first and get fluidly bigger.

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Even then you get particles. Also it seemed the blood came out of nowhere, It should be small first and get fluidly bigger.

couse i made it in 5 min o.o
ill work on it 0.o

Oh ****....

[sarcasm]Sorry then it's totally allowed, I mean if it's made in 5 minutes Then It's good. You should really make more 5 minutes animations[/sarcasm]

-_- Christ, put effort in it then!

Quote from majorgamer97

these are also not my sticks.but my anim is good

no its not. it only consisted of the beam, which you didnt make, and the cool sticks (which you also didnt make, i know because i downloaded the same ones but never use them) moving very stiffly and crappily
[sarcasm]incredible animation![/sarcasm]

Quote from Sina

heres my new animation >.<

same with yours, the stick is really cool but you did not make the stick or the beam and the anim is crap.
sorry if double post

Quote from pheonixslayer21

may be addicted to a game? bored of stick page for awhile? going to easytoon or flash? who knows :/

since im addicted to a game and not animating as much, ima throw this out there, ill say its a physics test ;)
abit slow, dont know why, all i did was supersample 4

any CC's on this one?

Btw, pplz if you can try to make your own sticks

Quote from teh aninminator

same with yours, the stick is really cool but you did not make the stick or the beam and the anim is crap.
sorry if double post

For **** christ saying, what the hell does it matter that he didn't make his own sticks?

Why is everyone judging someone on the sticks they choose.

Quote from pheonixslayer21

any CC's on this one?

Btw, pplz if you can try to make your own sticks

I don't make my own sticks, you hate me now? What does it matter? ppl put they're sticks on sites so others can use it.

The physics are getting better, but damn it's still crap. The ball should get roll away, the feet should go down, and the back is stiff.

Rival's mad.

Quote from Sina

heres new one....
btw i didnt made these sticks 0.o

There's not much to crit. The blood is weird.

Quote from Rival

For **** christ saying, what the hell does it matter that he didn't make his own sticks?

Why is everyone judging someone on the sticks they choose.





I don't make my own sticks, you hate me now? What does it matter? ppl put they're sticks on sites so others can use it.

The physics are getting better, but damn it's still crap. The ball should get roll away, the feet should go down, and the back is stiff.

Why are you so pissed and I don't hate you, jesus Christ I said TRY not DO, read the f***ing thing it doesn't matter at all

Quote from Oblivion EX

no, it's not too small. but its stiff, needs easing, and he needs to stay stationary (he moves slightly to the right... that shouldn't be)

and now, here's my latest anim, just testing weapons i guess. mostly, I was just bored.

What the **** did he do after the backflip!?

"You make me SUICIDAL!"

Love the song, and that's what he did. (my guess)

If you look closely he puts a ....knife-type-thingy in his body :S

Quote from MaxZ

What the **** did he do after the backflip!?

He snogged the guy, then took out a knife and killed himself.