Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Oct 2, 2009 9:57 PM #494916
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here is another one it is kind of an improvement i tried to make more movement and focused on my walking so please give me some feedback

I think this is kind of an improvement but the movements were still kindoff choppy. I think that if you made less space inbetween the frames than the movement would be more fluid.


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Oct 2, 2009 9:57 PM #494917
This is my first pivot. I'm an easytoon person, so it took a little adjusting to...
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Anyway, whadda ya think? btw, mojo = ojom
I can already tell theres a lot to improve. I definitly didn't move every joint in every frame..lol
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Oct 2, 2009 10:07 PM #494931
Dude if this is your first pivot than I'm micheal jackson!!
Oh wait....... I am.:Smile:
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Oct 2, 2009 10:09 PM #494935
I promise you that's my first pivot. I've had a bunch of training in easytoon though.
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Oct 3, 2009 1:17 AM #495024
Imagewell there i go hope i have improved frome when i first came here
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Oct 3, 2009 1:31 AM #495032
*moved to thread*
had so fun much makin' it.
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Oct 3, 2009 1:33 AM #495034
here is the improved version of the video

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please give me comments
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Oct 3, 2009 3:39 AM #495076
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here is the improved version of the video

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please give me comments


At your level, work on basics. Like walking.

Uh, needs easing.

And when he cleaves him in half you want to make it horizontally mirrored.
Look at Cronos's explosions animations, he vertically mirrors it, the explosion that's on the bottom doesn't merge with the one on the top.
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Oct 3, 2009 4:50 AM #495110
*moved to thread*
had so fun much makin' it.
no comments guys?
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Oct 3, 2009 4:52 AM #495111
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no comments guys?


Too fast .

That's a comment.
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Oct 3, 2009 5:25 AM #495124
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Too fast .

That's a comment.

the worst one ever.
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Oct 3, 2009 11:00 AM #495191
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I promise you that's my first pivot. I've had a bunch of training in easytoon though.

But that is soooooooo good for a first pivot. I mean, It makes my first ones look like absloute garbage. (Which they are).But yeah keep it up and I can garantee you that within a couple of years you will be the best person on stickpage.
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Oct 3, 2009 12:02 PM #495202
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But that is soooooooo good for a first pivot. I mean, It makes my first ones look like absloute garbage. (Which they are).But yeah keep it up and I can garantee you that within a couple of years you will be the best person on stickpage.

*one of the normal animators*
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Oct 3, 2009 12:16 PM #495206
Imagebugawoogawooga EXPLOSION!!!
I was very bored.
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Oct 3, 2009 12:31 PM #495218
Yes it should dissipate.