Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Oct 4, 2009 6:18 PM #495941

its ok,but not perfect for a first.

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Oct 4, 2009 6:27 PM #495955

@KidKick: A bit small. You could have probably resized less. When someone jumps they need to bend their legs first so that they can push the ground away to get the force necessary. You need to bend your sticks more before putting them in the air. It's a bit stiff too. It was pretty smooth though. I think you're improving, if I remember you rightly from before.

@Spades: you need to save properly. It's making it look choppy. Also, work on easing and realsitic movements. There was no easing there at all when there should have been some on every movement.

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Oct 4, 2009 6:30 PM #495957

Quote from Zed
@KidKick: A bit small. You could have probably resized less. When someone jumps they need to bend their legs first so that they can push the ground away to get the force necessary. You need to bend your sticks more before putting them in the air. It's a bit stiff too. It was pretty smooth though. I think you're improving, if I remember you rightly from before.

@Spades: you need to save properly. It's making it look choppy. Also, work on easing and realsitic movements. There was no easing there at all when there should have been some on every movement.

Yah thanks Zed Im working on a new amination right now and I'll try to or whatever.:)

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Oct 4, 2009 6:46 PM #495967

Hey Zed, (since you're the only one cc'ing in the beginner pivot thread)

Could you cc this one?

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Oct 4, 2009 6:48 PM #495970

thoses are pretty good.

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Oct 4, 2009 6:57 PM #495977

ok nevermid i'v went blank it could be a while.

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Oct 4, 2009 7:55 PM #496001

This was suppose to be a walk test, but it was so boren so i did this stupid pokeball thing, just CC on the walk im still trying to master the basics...
*I used Pivot 3, I dont kno if I saved it right so it might look like shit*

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Oct 4, 2009 8:02 PM #496005

Hey, Im new at Pivot and this is my very FIRST animation... im just a beginner so go easy on me...
here it is

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Oct 4, 2009 8:09 PM #496009

This is the beginners' thread. We go easy on everyone :)

Could be worse for your first, but you need to learn the basics and spend more time on each frame. It'll probably mean shorter anims, but quality will be higher.

@Teriyakid: The walk is pretty good, although he brings the lower leg down quite vertically which makes it look like he's marching. The pokeball thing was a bit stiff and I think you should have made it hit him faster but the zoom at the end was well done.

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Oct 4, 2009 9:17 PM #496035

Quote from ghost12321
Hey I just noticed.... not only did you post an EZtoons animation on the pivot forum, but your animation looks kind of similar to mine!!

Lol, no that's my sig...I was talking about the post I did a while ago. No one really replied to it:

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Oct 4, 2009 10:28 PM #496055

ok i tried topay attention to the legs zed i think i got it this time

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Oct 4, 2009 11:14 PM #496065

here is the improved version of my animation please tell me how it looks
i can't find out how to make it so that the video is able to be watched directly on this post so i am still gonna have to post the link sorry please tell me how to do it. (by the way the animation is to big so i can't upload it on this post)

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Oct 4, 2009 11:43 PM #496074

If you still post in this thread. You suck. Forget it. You are not good and never will be good.

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Oct 4, 2009 11:50 PM #496083

LOL, don't listen to water boy... you can always get better

and he sucks anyways....

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Oct 5, 2009 3:36 AM #496219

Alrite, Heres a "More effort put into" walk attempt then the one with the pokeball
(I kno the back is stiff, but everytime I try fixing up my animations, I make it worse then what it already was)