The speed he flies away at is inconsistent. If it's slomo it needs to be slower and for longer, but if not it needs to be faster earlier. The other guy needs to absorb the landing more. You're getting better though.
Here's some more speed animation, since my flash is buggered and I can't do what I needed to do with the other one right now. About 45 seconds to a minute for each frame on this one. It's hard to tell since I was interrupted by here a few times.
Creds to DrColosos for the background.
Edit: The background
was great prior to the .gif rape. Just imagine it's there and a guy called DrColosos from DA made it.
Edit2: I swear that leg in the air on the first jump for the pink guy looks shaky, but there is nowhere at all in the .piv file where it goes back on itself. Oh well.