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Quote from Coresyn

Hello all. I'm new here, just thought I'd show the first 4 animations I have made that I deem worthy of posting. I'm not that into them, I could do a lot better. I need to work on my beams, I know. These are in the order that I like them, not the order I made them. The last is my favorite so far, the first my least. GIFs raped my quality >:(
http://yfrog.com/3uswordtestg
http://yfrog.com/j1beam2g
http://yfrog.com/5hflyingdg
http://yfrog.com/5hbeamfailg

You need many more frames and much more movement. Try looking at how you move and then imitating it exactly.

this was a test for the blue thingy to show movement, not really for the sticks movement. i thought it looked bland so i added the ground smash fail.

Here is my flip fail

here's a run test

but I dont think the arms look like they're crossing

and cinnamonbun when you make the anticipation move the orange joint down so the feet are at the same level each frame like in this:


also coment on it too please

DJ:
very choppy, he looks like he is going into the ground, or at least trying.
1. raise the frame rate
2. dont move the joints so far from the shadow
3. the arms are stiff. they need to out flex
4. the the back is extremely stiff. when you run, does your back stay completely bent like that?\

Cinnamon:
there is no anticipation[that means there was no sign he was going to jump]
it was choppy, the legs were extremely stiff.
and btw: that is not your pivot rank.


in case ppl missed it, it was a test about the blue movement thingy...not the movement of the stick. i thought it looked bland so i added the ground smash
all my sticks

It needs to be much smoother. Try to keep the spacing more or less consistent.

Quote from Zed

It needs to be much smoother. Try to keep the spacing more or less consistent.

whos anim? mine, cinnamon, or dj?

dj. You ninja'd me and I didn't notice cinnamonbun.

Your effect is better that way round.

both the jump and the run were from a while back ill make and submit one later

Quote from Sonic Youth

DJ:
and btw: that is not your pivot rank.

yeah i know. i go update it. and a new crappy one i can not fix the legs.

[QUOTE=Cinnamonbun;1649702]yeah i know. i go update it. and a new crappy one i can not fix the legs

what was the quote for????

Quote from Sonic Youth

[quote=Cinnamonbun;1649702]yeah i know. i go update it. and a new crappy one i can not fix the legs

what was the quote for????

wait, what was your quote for?

Double post, im not going to be posting too much now, mostly on deviant art. TDW is going to show me tutorials, And while i am gone, do not make his animations look bad okay? See ya.

noboy likes this?:Nooooooo: i work hard to do this..................................=c

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