Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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willowdanny

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Aug 19, 2008 10:53 AM #227061
I like them. They seem good to me. But I'm only a beginner so...
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Aug 19, 2008 10:04 PM #227571
This is an uppercut i made.

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willowdanny

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Aug 19, 2008 10:58 PM #227617
good, but i think it would of been better if you did the uppercut with the other arm/hand
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Aug 20, 2008 5:11 AM #227986
how this kick,
RATE ME PLEASE!!!

http:// s530.photobucket.com/albums/dd343/ziaku_pivoteer/?action=view¤t=BACKFLIPKICK.gif
........ ^remove the space
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Aug 20, 2008 12:23 PM #228240
The kick is ok, you could make it better by using a better stick and maybe add a floor as it doesnt look as good
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Aug 20, 2008 2:08 PM #228336
http://530.photobucket.com/albums/dd343/ziaku_pivoteer/?action=view¤t=BACKFLIPKICK.gif

You need to work, choppyness, easing, and stiffness.
There are some good tuts on http://www.darkdemon.org
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Aug 20, 2008 4:30 PM #228462
What do you think of this attempt of blood.
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By willowdanny at 2008-08-20
I tried to make it fade away but I don't know if it worked.
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Aug 20, 2008 5:51 PM #228560
its ok... but its should shrink away to nothing.... in the air.... check ot bahas tut on www.darkdemon.org for blood
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Aug 20, 2008 6:21 PM #228579
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What do you think of this attempt of blood.
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By willowdanny at 2008-08-20
I tried to make it fade away but I don't know if it worked.

kinda choppeh. more frames and smoothing and your gold. (blood should splat, not fade)
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Aug 20, 2008 7:13 PM #228621
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What do you think of this attempt of blood.
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By willowdanny at 2008-08-20
I tried to make it fade away but I don't know if it worked.


Don't just start with little particles immediatly. Make the particles bigger at the beginning and then make them smaller. It'll look better. Also, you want the blood to come out faster. And the blood needs to be darker.
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Aug 20, 2008 10:14 PM #228697
Is this one any better?
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Aug 21, 2008 4:45 AM #228884
WillowDanny the blood effect has improved since your last post but when swords falling
you might wanna move it faster to be more realistic, instead of it sort of floating down (This advice might not be so great cause' I am a beginner myself).
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Aug 21, 2008 10:39 PM #229829
i really like it :D
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Aug 22, 2008 4:41 AM #230170
http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchtesttallpd9.gif

I tried to smooth it out to much lol should of just stuck to my regular punch

But im here to learn!
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Aug 22, 2008 5:22 AM #230205
First Animation [ATTACH]5791[/ATTACH]