Tommy. I will tell you the bad points so you can improve on them on both animations.
Animation 1:
Falls weird, bullet goes slow then goes fast. And when he got shot by sniper, i feel the blood should of came out quicker. Keep trying mate.
Animation 2:
They float off the ground. When he throws sword in to him its a bit weird. Keep trying, your get better. I'm still pretty crap, but i'm ok-ish.
Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.
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Feb 27, 2007 5:33 PM #24865
Feb 27, 2007 8:54 PM #24872
Feb 27, 2007 8:58 PM #24873
Blur the whole jump.
Feb 27, 2007 9:01 PM #24875
Quote from salineTwas low begginer choppeh and stiff. The blood wasn't that great Don't ask to be rated every animation only if you see major improvement in your work.....
i only asked for two and what if i did think i saw an improvement it was good to me
Feb 27, 2007 9:01 PM #24876
ok ill do that tommorow proabaly. too tired to do it tonight, BTW is it smooth?
Feb 27, 2007 9:21 PM #24878
it needs work.And you should blur the whole thing and show it where the guy lands.It was alright.
2.5/5 on the low-beginner scale.Only because it lacked main intrest,lacked effects which I am strict on(by effects I mean half of the blur),work on easing and that will result in a better animation.
also,I'm with you on Beast and the Harlot
2.5/5 on the low-beginner scale.Only because it lacked main intrest,lacked effects which I am strict on(by effects I mean half of the blur),work on easing and that will result in a better animation.
also,I'm with you on Beast and the Harlot
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Feb 27, 2007 9:30 PM #24879
Ok, please rate this. I just wanted to test the black cinema things. What rank is it? Low beg or med beg or what?

Edit: Btw i might finish it, because it's not really finished.

Edit: Btw i might finish it, because it's not really finished.
Feb 27, 2007 9:37 PM #24881
you've seen some of my animations right..ya know the ones that are a lot better than 95% of the ones in this thread.Either way I don't know for sure.But what I do know is my animations are better than yours,akuzu.And I'm not even medium beginner.I'm not trying to discourage you or anything.But I get irritated when people ask that when I'm better than them. it was alright,work on physics,blood,easing,smoothing,effects,the usual.and the cinime thing is supposed to show a zoomed in thing,so I couln't tell if the figures were taller than 100 pixels.Keep working on it and if it's not finished work on the stuff I listed in this post....damn this is a long post.lol.
edit:: pm me if you have trouble or have a few questions
edit:: pm me if you have trouble or have a few questions
Feb 28, 2007 12:42 AM #24893
here is abackflip i did.


Feb 28, 2007 1:30 AM #24897
Feb 28, 2007 1:39 AM #24898
Yeah, work on the choppyness of the beam, if its a good effect, the choppyness kills it. The beam was okay but beams don't need 5 or 6 diffrent colors, its just needs 2 or maybe 3 with a good look to it.
Feb 28, 2007 1:41 AM #24899
ty. ya, i figured that but meh. well, prtty interesting beam u got there. i like it. i dont know what else u can do to improve it much u pretty much got it all.
here is a kick test:

i have a question, in flash, do u have to re-draw the last frame each fram?
here is a kick test:

i have a question, in flash, do u have to re-draw the last frame each fram?
Feb 28, 2007 2:03 AM #24900
about flash,no,it's more like pivot than easytoon.And it was choppy(your animation)
Feb 28, 2007 2:08 AM #24901
my ball animation?
Feb 28, 2007 2:09 AM #24902
The kick had very little force to it and it just swung. To build more of a kicking motion you need to bend the knee and when he brings his leg back make it slow down once its close to its desination and put in a frame of no movement right after that then swing the leg forward... Thats how I do it atleast. Whatever, give it a try.

