Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Oct 26, 2008 8:00 PM #280895
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Took me a while, What do you think?
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Oct 26, 2008 8:32 PM #280917
when he jumps on the first one, it zooms a bit too quickly to the peak of the jump, then suddenly slows when he goes down to land. Maybe just add a couple more frames to when he's nearing the peak of his jump.
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Oct 26, 2008 8:53 PM #280943
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Hi guys! I have just create this animation
Combo + walk test
C&C pls
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Great, now gtfo and smell freedom.... young grasshopper
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Oct 26, 2008 9:01 PM #280949
WoW thats mean I can go out from begginer section ?? o.o
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Oct 27, 2008 1:10 AM #281084
Here's a run loop test, please C&C

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Oct 27, 2008 2:00 AM #281125
well the look like they're bumping each other then it stops for frame and your run looks like a brisk walkk
a run should look like this
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or this
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Oct 27, 2008 3:35 AM #281180
Me noob =D happy to take some tips and suggestions
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Oct 27, 2008 9:51 AM #281271
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Me noob =D happy to take some tips and suggestions


Just do the basic first, like easing, walking, running etc
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Oct 27, 2008 11:33 AM #281280
my first animation
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Oct 27, 2008 11:36 AM #281281
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Took me a while, What do you think?



cool check connor307 animation
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Oct 27, 2008 11:37 AM #281282
check connor307 file
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Oct 27, 2008 1:37 PM #281316
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well the look like they're bumping each other then it stops for frame and your run looks like a brisk walkk
a run should look like this

or this


Actually, his look better.
Yours are total crap. The only thing is that he probably double-framed it on accident making it look weird.
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Oct 27, 2008 1:41 PM #281322
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Me noob =D happy to take some tips and suggestions


U like skateboarding then? lol. ncie work, u got the jumpsa working well.:Happy:
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Oct 27, 2008 7:13 PM #281460
How bad are they ? (again :P)
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Thanks for your time :)
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Oct 27, 2008 9:28 PM #281554
@ RMF

1st : During the walking part, his legs move way to fast and why does his forearm just move back a little? Try to make his legs move slower and try to judge how fast he should move while walking.
While he ran his arms were kinda weird to me, but the run was okay. Try to make his spine move up and down rhythmically while he runs.

2nd : A little stiff. When he fell the physics were okay as well, but when he hits the ground you should make his head, legs and arms bounce up slightly, then back down.
The run for that one guy was good, but also use easing when he falls and when he slows down to fall.

3rd : When he punched it was good, but try to use easing when he starts and ends.
The backflip (to me) was amazing, I could never do a decent backflip. Very nice.
When he jumped forward and landed on the ground, why does his back hit, then the legs just flop down? Shouldn't his upper body bend a bit forward since he was moving forward?

Hope this helps you xD