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Well maybe you could make it more smooth? Hahah but I still don't get what are they doing?

they are trying to leav that place..its because they are leaving that room its the best i did 4 that moment...

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The punch is okay. What's with the huge pause halfway through the punch?

Also, when he punches his arm should stick out straight instead of being bent downwards.

The arm returns to it's original position a bit fast, too.

Thanks for the help brick'd, the pause was like...gaining power, you could say, try it in real life lol, still, i'll try to improve it next time

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they are trying to leav that place..its because they are leaving that room its the best i did 4 that moment...

Oh, ok I get you :P
And sorry for the double spam

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This is what happens to a guy who looks down other than up ps. rate it for me 1-10

Is anyone gonna rate this cuz i asked to rate from 1-10 and if I did tell me what I did wrong.

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Is anyone gonna rate this cuz i asked to rate from 1-10 and if I did tell me what I did wrong.

I'm not a good rater but if I was going to rate this I'm going to rate it 2...sorry for that because the blood effects weren't too good, and it was a bit choppy and un smooth.
I hope your next work would be much better, have patience, spend more time :)

Thanks finally a credict who doesn't call me a bitch,whore,slut, or faggot

0.0...They are evil lol

I've been workin on this I call it Fingers Rule And I need a critic to rate this.

Quit double posting. It's a bad habit.

There is an edit button.

The animation is kind of strange. The figure that "got thrown off of the screen" returned, and the blood appeared for one frame. Very choppy and stiff, and without a floor. Work on basic movements and keeping them from being choppy or stiff.



I know I posted this before, but I kinda want a bit more feedback.

How is it? What can be improved?

Yeah and can someone tell me how mine is? it's the last animation on page 533. P.S It might confuse people how he falls Brick so you can work on diffrent ways to cause pain to other sticks =)

I'm pretty sure I added comments for your animation on the post above.

You need to move every joint of the stickman or else it's too stiff, aiiiight? ;)

Quote from brick'd

Quit double posting. It's a bad habit.

There is an edit button.

The animation is kind of strange. The figure that "got thrown off of the screen" returned, and the blood appeared for one frame. Very choppy and stiff, and without a floor. Work on basic movements and keeping them from being choppy or stiff.



I know I posted this before, but I kinda want a bit more feedback.

How is it? What can be improved?

everything was ok on that one except the fall
that was horrid

Thought that was pretty sad...felt bad for the stickman