Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Apr 10, 2009 2:10 AM #392630
loks fine ta me
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Apr 10, 2009 3:51 AM #392683
Most the pivots here are super cool. If only I was that good. lol

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Apr 10, 2009 7:38 AM #392741
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I didn't use any tutorials for this (maybe I should have done, you tell me), I just did what I felt looked right.

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Any specific comments (ie. "the stride is too long") would be welcome although I'm sure the standard "more easing" comments will appear as well.

Overeased. The arms move too much, otherwise OK. Maybe his back should bend.
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Apr 10, 2009 9:11 AM #392783
Make a stick with back joints. The loop wasn't really good. If you practice more, you'll be out of here in no time.

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Apr 10, 2009 10:22 AM #392822
That stick did actually have back joints, I just didn't consider using them for the walk. It shouldn't be too hard to fix it, hold on ten minutes.

Edit: Here we go -

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How's that? (I haven't changed the arms yet)
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Apr 10, 2009 10:28 AM #392825
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how's it?

c&c plz
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Apr 10, 2009 10:36 AM #392826
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how's it?

c&c plz


On the jumps, it looks like you've bent down ready to jump, which is good, but then you haven't extended. Essentially they crouch and then fly.

Asside from that it's not bad.
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Apr 10, 2009 10:46 AM #392827
ok i'll "patch" it ^_^
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Apr 10, 2009 11:21 AM #392843
Zed: It looks unnatural, and as been said before, the loop isn't good. Also it was very stiff.
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Apr 10, 2009 12:57 PM #392879
Thanks for the comments. Here's another one; I don't think it's that bad. Really I was looking at the physics and the bounce but I put a man in there for the hell of it and to give it some context.

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Apr 10, 2009 2:36 PM #392934
hey that luks good to me
but still i'm just a novice...i can't judge u:Phew:
a test on jumping....
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C&C:Happy:
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Apr 10, 2009 6:00 PM #393021
SUCKS ASS. jk. ease up more on the jump, make more frames, speed it up a bit, and itll look good.
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Apr 10, 2009 8:49 PM #393114
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SUCKS ASS. jk. ease up more on the jump, make more frames, speed it up a bit, and itll look good.


lol bragging. This IS the pivot section.
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Apr 11, 2009 5:01 AM #393376
k! thanks 4 criticism.....i'll mend it

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lol bragging. This IS the pivot section.


um.......what do you mean by this....
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Apr 11, 2009 6:39 AM #393429
Quote from kidkick680
i gota say im really good at pivot i cant post it right now cause iv made them on a freinds computer and + im on a wii right now. but i would post them im not lyeing i am good at it.us


sayin'll not do....:Phew:
try to post any of your anims..then we'll see
and if its not a lie......then its fine...