What about the bit where he got up?

its good accept the arms are stiff so try make them move more freely when hes in the air and make the reaction right when he hits the ground.

can u please critisise mine?

that was good, but fighting would be better.

@Zagger: It's really stiff and there's almost nothing to the animation. The gunshot itself ought to fade over another frame or two instead of disappearing.

@Cronos: The walk looked forced, step by step. It needed to flow better. Try starting the second step right after the first comes down.

GET ANOTHER WALK!!!! :P

ps: zed have you found the stolen one?

edit: zagger: Don't use sprite in a pivot anim.

edit edit: this is my walk
I know i've posted this before but i forgot that only cronos commented it last time.

comment?

**** you sprite haters! Sprites are fine as long as you make them yourself. Also, Rival. You'll get nowhere with animating walks

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=38284 This.

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GET ANOTHER WALK!!!! :P

ps: zed have you found the stolen one?

edit: zagger: Don't use sprite in a pivot anim.

edit edit: this is my walk
I know i've posted this before but i forgot that only cronos commented it last time.

comment?

The stickamn is stiff.

Haha, Pivot is fun.

woah.. the fall looked wrong

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ps: zed have you found the stolen one?

No. I checked miles back and even looked through some of the more recent individual threads which had been made by newbs but it's not there any more. Either three of us simultaneously experienced identical deja vu, or it's one of these:

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35330&page=2546
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35330&page=2550
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35330&page=2539
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35330&page=2510

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Haha, Pivot is fun.

You didn't know ?!
You should make him more bouncy.

anim :

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The stickamn is stiff.

I always have a stickamn.

Zyles I didn't ask that. I asked what you found of the walk since I only got crits from cronos. AND IT IS ORIGINAL!

And I already am making other things. But I'm not going to post until I like it, I got problems with stifness.


edit: zed, it wasn't on these pages, it was more in the mid of the section, I wish I could visit all those pages, but I don't want to.

Dudes , does this look like any smoke grenade?