Shot at 2007-07-10this is my 1st attempt at a gun what you thhink[SIZE="7"][/SIZE]need mentoor:Happy:

Gun, you should work on basics first. It was choppy, stiff, and non-realistic. You also messed up on the blood BIG TIME. It should be a darker shade of red. And the last blood splats used, should be in BACK of the stickman. My verdict: Don't use guns yet.

gunmetal, you're still getting to know pivot i see, low beginner (at least it's not nUb lol).

you rushed it too, you made one frame, moving towards the head, next at the head, and next back down, ease
frame one: move a bit
2: lil more
i've explained this too much, can someone else tell him?

http://img65.imageshack.us/my.php?image=spas2kr4.gif

Is the shaking better? I decided not to add a background.


EDIT:Gunmetal, heres a few tips. Look at some tutorials on blood, physics,easing and reactions. The blood needs to kind of spurt out of the wound, not just appear. Most important of all, practice.

By Trevor881 at 2007-07-10

like it?
creds to droidz for the sticks

work on just about . . . everything . . .

and an1g8m0r, meh not really, just needs overall improvment i guess.

now someone gimme something to Fvcking animate!!!!

Um....make a stickman with the flu... :-0

Thanks for the comments.

rate plz! and comments appreciated

Hey wussup guyz, um Here's a Halfway finished Anim. and i'm HEAVILY working on my smoothness, and easing, so can you guys tell me how smooth it is so far, and what i need to work on?


Gladly Appreciate Skr1lla

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Hey, Skrilla! You're getting better and better man. I think it's pretty smooth so far, but you need to work on stiffiness and the reactions. How good were you at flipbooks?

Edit: Walking. Don't forget walking.

yeah but, heavily increasing smoofnezz may be what you say, but thats exactly what i did and they ended up sucky cause i ignored all other concept (movements, effects, stiffness) so yea...

thats pretty smooth, just work on walking a bit

would some one comment on mine plz and possibly rate?

the beam or whatever was overall smooth but as for the stick, its really stiff..i rate it med-low begginner