For the walk, I didn't like the little pause between each step. Mostly cause of how nobody would ever do that in real life. But the thing wasn't bad.
And the run was pretty good, too. But you need more easing, pretty much. And the stick's torso was stiff.
And yeah, the back is too long.
Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.
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Sep 20, 2009 10:39 AM #489649
Sep 20, 2009 10:40 AM #489650
for the walk: Thanks, I'll try to fix.
For the run: If I'd eased it more, it gets too slow. Thanks though.
For the run: If I'd eased it more, it gets too slow. Thanks though.
Sep 20, 2009 12:37 PM #489676
Quote from nooob300Check out this walk.Ok wat should i do to work on my easing.
Yes you are a noob.
Sep 20, 2009 1:08 PM #489694
Comparing
this
Or this:
(7fps)
I deleted one frame in the step, and added one last frame for smoothing.
Crit this please, someone, I'm waiting impatiently to improve next thing but wont untill critted.
this
Or this:
(7fps)
I deleted one frame in the step, and added one last frame for smoothing.
Crit this please, someone, I'm waiting impatiently to improve next thing but wont untill critted.
Sep 20, 2009 2:39 PM #489715
This is my first wallking test tell me if you like or if i did something wrong :PSep 20, 2009 3:13 PM #489730
@Out of Ideas: It's better without the smoothing frame. When I make my walks I would usually pick the back leg up a bit more and make the stride longer, but that's just my style and your way still looks fine. Try to have the upper leg start moving backwards before the leg is fully extended. That way you can still have the easing in there but it helps get rid of the one-step-at-a-time thing.
On the run, I would have bent the leg in the air more and extended it further at the other end.
On the whole its quite good.
@shambam: you need twice sa many frames and you need to set frame delay to 6 when you save. You have the basic movements ok but without enough frames you can't show easing and it looks choppy. Also, try to keep the foot placement consistant.
On the run, I would have bent the leg in the air more and extended it further at the other end.
On the whole its quite good.
@shambam: you need twice sa many frames and you need to set frame delay to 6 when you save. You have the basic movements ok but without enough frames you can't show easing and it looks choppy. Also, try to keep the foot placement consistant.
Sep 20, 2009 3:33 PM #489738
moothing frame.[/quote]@Out of Ideas: It's better without the s
Ok, I'll cut it out.
k the back leg up a bit more and make the stride longer, but that's just my style and your way still looks fine.[/quote]When I make my walks I would usually pic
Well, I don't know about you but IRL you also don't have long strides and don't pick up your feet that much.[/quote]
ackwards before the leg is fully extended. That way you can still have the easing in there but it helps get rid of the one-step-at-a-time thing.Try to have the upper leg start moving b
example?
I don't understand, can you give an
the air more and extended it further at the other end.On the run, I would have bent the leg in
On the whole its quite good.
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Thanks for that, I'll fix.
TY for Critisism!
Sep 20, 2009 3:50 PM #489753
My walk is this:
I don't know if you can quite see what I mean for the front leg in that, so I'll make a slow motion front leg for you. I needed to make one for my tut anyway.
Edit: here it is
I don't know if you can quite see what I mean for the front leg in that, so I'll make a slow motion front leg for you. I needed to make one for my tut anyway.
Edit: here it is
Sep 20, 2009 5:56 PM #489800
I think I know what you mean, but that's such detail that I won't be bothered with it. It's quite eased imo already.
Besides, I hate doing details wich people barely even notice.
EDIT: Now I DO know what you mean.
Well that's easier for you, for you have no feet. With feet, you need that make the right movement, and that's too detailed still to bother.
Thanks anyway though, I really apreciate it.
Besides, I hate doing details wich people barely even notice.
EDIT: Now I DO know what you mean.
Well that's easier for you, for you have no feet. With feet, you need that make the right movement, and that's too detailed still to bother.
Thanks anyway though, I really apreciate it.
Sep 20, 2009 7:55 PM #489843
my first punch test :P please comment :Happy:Sep 20, 2009 8:21 PM #489860
Quote from shambam
If I comment, will you promise to pay attention and save with frame delay 6?
Sep 20, 2009 8:47 PM #489868
Quote from ZedIf I comment, will you promise to pay attention and save with frame delay 6?
i did put the frame delay 6 >.< and yes i promise i will pay attention.
Sep 20, 2009 9:46 PM #489880
In that case you're using pivot 3 and you need frame rate 16 because it's really choppy. You also need much more frames. Every movement needs easing. You also need to try to move every joint in every frame. The reaction was good and the tremour looked alright though.
Sep 21, 2009 4:20 AM #490027
That was a 12 frame animation it would seem...
Sep 21, 2009 2:00 PM #490101
ummm i havent used pivot in a while cause i have been using flash a lot so can some1 give me something to animate ^.^