Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Oct 9, 2009 8:16 PM #498124

i know its small sorry.

just a punch with the stick you get hen you start up pivot.

bouncy bouncy bouncy bouncy fun fun fun fun fun!

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Oct 9, 2009 9:15 PM #498141

wut the @#$% !?

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Oct 9, 2009 10:52 PM #498173

Quote from soulless

i know its small sorry.

just a punch with the stick you get hen you start up pivot.

bouncy bouncy bouncy bouncy fun fun fun fun fun!

i know i am just a noob but the punch looks good and the bouncy bouncy thing looks nice and a bit funny but i think that his arms should move more when he is in the air after bounces instead of just being out straight though. but please any one else out there tell me if i am wrong about this 'cause i am only a noob so i may be wrong but that is just my opinion

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Oct 9, 2009 11:02 PM #498177

yeah i get you. i only kept it like that cuz i wnted it 2 look like hes rlly concentrating

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Oct 9, 2009 11:09 PM #498181

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That ain't "pretty good", it's "pretty bad".

It's extremely stiff, you shouldn't move just the arms, but whole body. There wasn't any easing.

You fail at giving c&c.. There was easing you dumbass, maybe the back and the left arm are stiff. Besides that everything is fine but some movement is wrong.

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Oct 10, 2009 1:35 AM #498213

My first posted animation[ATTACH]6802[/ATTACH]

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Oct 10, 2009 1:42 AM #498215

uhhhh...... nice idea but it is choppy. but i am just a noob so i am gonna let someone more experienced take over

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Oct 10, 2009 4:47 AM #498261

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My first posted animation[ATTACH]6802[/ATTACH]

first learn how to walk. then run. then punch. then kick. you gotta learn the basics. your a beginner so its ok just letting you know

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Oct 10, 2009 5:23 AM #498267

Yeah..

My first animation in a long time, (been scripting purely in Flash, and even then just recently after a couple year's break) so i figured I'd put this here. Considering I have less than twenty posts, just put in an http:// in front of the link below.

img63.imageshack.us/i/punchtest.gif/

C&C please.

Thanks in advance.

EDIT: Might as well contribute to the thread if I'm going to post something myself. Blax, you had the concept down right, but you just need to apply a few concepts such as easing, and to erase stiffness by creating more frames.

www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=106185

Bahamut made a fantastic tutorial on general animation, try looking here. ^^

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Oct 10, 2009 7:13 AM #498291

How is this?

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Oct 10, 2009 8:52 AM #498308

Please Pcson stop reffering to yourself as a noob when you're clearly not. A noob is someone who has NO experience in animating. Where as I can see you do. You are simply beginner, but not and I repeat NOT a noob!

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Oct 10, 2009 9:24 AM #498312

my latest animation

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Oct 10, 2009 9:37 AM #498323

Easing was good, blood was good and the dashed cut was good. But there is still one fatel thing that will make or brake your animations, And that is stiffness. Youre animation is too stiff. You need to move all the joints all the time.

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Oct 10, 2009 11:41 AM #498352

This is mah LAZAH!!!!!!!!!

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Oct 10, 2009 2:17 PM #498404

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Please Pcson stop reffering to yourself as a noob when you're clearly not. A noob is someone who has NO experience in animating. Where as I can see you do. You are simply beginner, but not and I repeat NOT a noob!

No.
Noob is someone who acts like an idiot.