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Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Oct 30, 2009 8:19 PM #507756
I think ghost is high beginner. That's just not a good animation to give as an example. I've seen better from him.

Also; what's everyone's obsession with the damn ranks? They don't matter and they're silly and often just wrong.
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Oct 30, 2009 8:23 PM #507758
Ghost, get down effects and blood.
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Oct 30, 2009 8:26 PM #507761
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Ghost, get down effects and blood.

There are some of those (along with better animations) on my thread "am I any good at pivot?"
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Oct 31, 2009 12:50 AM #507884
Kinda messed up the ending
http://img519.imageshack.us/img519/4919/kidreckonsupreme.gif
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Oct 31, 2009 4:16 AM #507964
this is not my first, and its not my longest, i just made it as a example of the effects i learned :Happy:
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Oct 31, 2009 4:23 AM #507970
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Another stupid post.

Another stupid post
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Oct 31, 2009 4:50 AM #507983
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Another stupid post

worst ****ing comment ever.
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Oct 31, 2009 9:05 AM #508044
thanks flood,I tried to make it flow without easing too much and that was the result,thanks anyway.
any other comments?
new animation guys
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what do you think?
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Oct 31, 2009 1:25 PM #508085
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Both of you need to read this. It's the movements mainly. Nowhere near enough frames for what you're trying to do.

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There's no easing. Without the easing there's no force either. It just looks wrong. Easing is the single most important part of an animation. He also needed to bend down much more before the jump, otherwise there's nowhere to generat the force from.

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what do you think?


This part's relevant to the steps on the other one too: when you step the movement of the foot should be more circular than linear. What I mean is, because the knees are stiff, you've basically brought the foot back down on the same line that it went up on. If you were to actually try walking/running like that you'd break your toes. When I say circular motion I mean like this (excuse rushing. The hips would be moving too which would make it more pronounced):

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The roll was good, especially with no back joints, but the upper body seemed a bit stiff on landing. I think it could have used some more shock absorbsion.
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Oct 31, 2009 2:01 PM #508094
ImageHey guys could you CC this animation, I think it's my best to date.
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Oct 31, 2009 2:19 PM #508098
The blood needed more splatter and particles but besides that it's a great job. For entertainment and story telling this is your best, although I always think more movement is better for showing off the skill of the animator.
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Oct 31, 2009 3:17 PM #508111
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ImageHey guys could you CC this animation, I think it's my best to date.

The eyes are too close, otherwise it's nice.
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Oct 31, 2009 9:13 PM #508253
Hey Guys!
I haven't been on in a while :]
So I just decided to post ;D
Imma make an easing animation, be right back! <3
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Oct 31, 2009 9:51 PM #508273
ImageCC? :] Sorry for double post D;
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Oct 31, 2009 10:12 PM #508280
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ImageHey guys could you CC this animation, I think it's my best to date.

I don't think you need to post in the beginner's section anymore, but
I am a noob so I don't know...
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