Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.
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bubblesBannedPosts: 1,633
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View Profile my first pivot punch
the punch itself is to fast, however I did see
some easing after he had punched. And I think that if you watch some punching tutorials then you should get better.
also I see that foot going under the line, don't do that it looks really bad, if you can't avoid the foot going under the line than make it bigger, that's what I do.
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View Profile ok then........ it is my first punch
Most people use the Edit button...
bubblesBannedPosts: 1,633
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View Profile Oh, jeez... should i still be in the beginners section?
Here is mah thread
clicky
Well, judging by your newest I'd say no. you've gotten rid of most of that shakyness that poluted your vids, and you have little to no stiffness, but this is my opinion, to be sure ask someoene like jutsu or zed or poppet.
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View Profile Do you wanna know something interesting? No one ever told me to leave the beginner's section.
Basically, decide for yourself. If you make an animation which you think is worth a whole thread to itself, make a thread for it. If it's just a short test-type thing then either put it here or put it in that thread you linked. We don't really go in for the nazi bureaucracy thing like dd do.
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View Profile Ye I agree zed, allso could you look up my thread please? I've edited the front page to contain only the best ones so there aren't many links.
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View Profile okay zed, i see what you mean
that shakyness that poluted your vids
Where was this shakyness you speak of?
bubblesBannedPosts: 1,633
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View Profile okay zed, i see what you mean
Where was this shakyness you speak of?
In some of your old animations like the split kick I think, anyway I know you have improved and that's all that matters.
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View Profile Here's my first run with the help of a tutorial:
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8027/runbj.gif
C&C would be appreciated.
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View Profile Here's my first run with the help of a tutorial:
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8027/runbj.gif
C&C would be appreciated.
It's OK I guess, though it is quite stiff, also he goes up in the air and stops, don't do that, try to make it flow better. I think I saw a little easing but you do need more of it.
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View Profile I just need to post 20 more times then i will show What Ive GOT!!!!
http://img402.imageshack.us/g/dashtest4.gif/Zed2Posts: 11,572
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View Profile Actually you don't.
Edit that post and you'll find you can now insert a link into it.
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View Profile The effects could be worse. Some of the fighting was pretty reasonable. For someone who's never had constructive criticism before you seem to have a grasp of how to try to make your animation look as good as possible with what you know.
Unfortunately, no one manages to work everything out for themselves. You need to learn all the basics. Hopefully this will help:
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1582585#post1582585Zombie HunterPosts: 9
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View Profile [ATTACH]6853[/ATTACH] shoot him!!