No one needs to post in beginners here. We're nice like that :)

You're not bad, but you really need to work on your running. You don't raise the upper front leg high enough before extension and that would just trip him up instantly. It's just enough to bring it forward without scraping the floor, but you're going to lose it on the way back where a lower body has made it impossible to pull the leg back without either driving the heel into the ground and his femur into his hip, or raising the upper leg further which doesn't happen.

There's also not enough downforce before he jumps over the rock and that means he shouldn't get the height he does. Same for the little jump with Prescot's stick.

The effect's ok, although I'd have liked to see it continued.

But yeah, by our standards there's no real reason you should post here unless you're just doing a test.