Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Mar 12, 2010 10:33 PM #555439
This post wasnt done straight after the last! don't think I'm a newb I know not to double post but If I'm gonna show you guys than I need to. It's basicly a continuation of that other one take a look...Image
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Mar 12, 2010 10:43 PM #555441
Not much there, but the only problem I could see was the word 'lol' flashing across the screen which made it look like youtube pivoting. Besides that, still good easing.
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Mar 12, 2010 10:50 PM #555442
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This post wasnt done straight after the last! don't think I'm a newb I know not to double post but If I'm gonna show you guys than I need to. It's basicly a continuation of that other one take a look...Image

Ouch, right in the nuts. Poor guy :Cry:
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Mar 12, 2010 11:07 PM #555446
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Very stiff and a little uneased. I dislike skateboards because people tend not to move much on them - try absorbing the centrifugal force as he goes around the loop and flinging the body more into the jump or something. Or do something which you can make loose from the start.

Um,
English please?
Derp.
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Mar 12, 2010 11:38 PM #555456
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Um,
English please?
Derp.

I'll translate.

Very stiff and a little uneased. I dislike skateboards because people tend not to move much on them - try absorbing the centrifugal force as he goes around the loop and flinging the body more into the jump or something. Or do something which you can make loose from the start.
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Mar 12, 2010 11:41 PM #555457
lol. I mean it just doesn't move much. You could bend the legs into the curve and jump out of it, which would be hard, or you could do something completely different.
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Mar 13, 2010 4:07 AM #555526
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lol. I mean it just doesn't move much. You could bend the legs into the curve and jump out of it, which would be hard, or you could do something completely different.

Ohhh.
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I'll translate.

Very stiff and a little uneased. I dislike skateboards because people tend not to move much on them - try absorbing the centrifugal force as he goes around the loop and flinging the body more into the jump or something. Or do something which you can make loose from the start.


lol'd
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Mar 13, 2010 10:07 AM #555612
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I'll translate.

Very stiff and a little uneased. I dislike skateboards because people tend not to move much on them - try absorbing the centrifugal force as he goes around the loop and flinging the body more into the jump or something. Or do something which you can make loose from the start.

since when were you ever nice?
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Mar 13, 2010 9:14 PM #555712
Looks like I haven't posted here in awhile. Time for some criticism:
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Mar 13, 2010 9:23 PM #555715
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And stuff and stuff.
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Mar 13, 2010 9:24 PM #555716
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Looks like I haven't posted here in awhile. Time for some criticism:
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Well the effects were adequate at best, i'm not really a master at effects but they looks OK. however the men were stiff and uneased. The physics where off and I don't really get whats going on.
Next time try making an animation not based on effects so that I can see what ur capable of.
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Mar 13, 2010 9:43 PM #555717
Yeah, the movement that there was was quite shaky. And I think most of the effects were sprites (correct me if I'm wrong). I think you should do something simpler.
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Mar 13, 2010 10:01 PM #555721
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And stuff and stuff.


Was last post so I got no CC, what do you think of it please?
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Mar 13, 2010 10:09 PM #555723
Hmmm. The movement itself is nice. The slo-mo looked a little shaky though, and I'd like to see more followthrough. It seemed a bit stiff too.
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Mar 13, 2010 10:25 PM #555728
Ive been working on this. besides the land and stuff. Not too bad. killer ball. :D Image