Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Asylum

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Sep 29, 2007 12:48 AM #60816

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well, for one thing, the feet werent even on the same spot of the ground half the time, stiff choppy, no easing blah blah blah, what else would you expect from your (possibly) first animtion? also, dont take this personally and dont be offended, its your first animtion.
I would show you my oldest animtion too, but, i deleted all of my animations because they all sucked ass.
then i did a lot of tests before i made an actual fight animtion.

I know, still like to keep to show how I've improoved.

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Sep 29, 2007 1:20 AM #60819

hey guys umm think im getting closer to boarder but no one commented on this ani yet please rate!!! :)
http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omgyo7.gif

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Sep 29, 2007 1:24 AM #60820

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hey guys umm think im getting closer to boarder but no one commented on this ani yet please rate!!! :)
http://img515.imageshack.us/my.php?image=omgyo7.gif

I give it med beginner. Smoke was good, movements= ok, Reaction on fall= needs work, First landing/jump= needs work.

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Sep 29, 2007 1:26 AM #60821

ok thank you ill try to fix it

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Sep 29, 2007 2:28 AM #60832

guys lets stop the flaming, everyone has there own opinion, just deal with the criticisms.

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Sep 29, 2007 2:31 AM #60833

There was flaming? When?

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Sep 29, 2007 2:51 AM #60835

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ok iv heared that mine todally sucks. so im gonna have to practice a lot. and i mean it. im gonna post 3 hits of walking next post or this post by edit and i want to know witch one is good

Edit: here they are:
walk 1
walk 2
and walk 3

Edit 2: to me all 3 of them suck

Never use any of them.

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Sep 29, 2007 2:56 AM #60840

Try using easing and making your walk slower to make it look realistic New100.

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Sep 29, 2007 2:58 AM #60842

Can some PLZ rate my midget animation? ive already posted it like 5 times and i really want a rank for it. I will post it again if you ask.

New100 I [SIZE="7"]strongly suggest[/SIZE] you look at many tutorials before you post [SIZE="7"]anything[/SIZE] like that again. Please dont take it personally, i know you can do better than those.

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Sep 29, 2007 3:10 AM #60850

Can you post it again? Lol.

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Sep 29, 2007 3:12 AM #60851

okay dark, you got the invisible text code wrong. and ill edit this post when i upload it.
this is the code at work, dark
here it is plz rate and also, on the part when he bursts out of the ground, i know it sucked, i didnt know how else to ambush him.

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Sep 29, 2007 3:18 AM #60854

i no this is kinda strange because im not new to this site but how do u post ur vid so that u dont have to go to the web site to see it

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Sep 29, 2007 3:19 AM #60855

Quote from Asylum
Can I comment? Yes, but I can't rate (I'm a noob.) I liked it, the anim was smooth and I think it wasn't stiff (if my memory serves me well.)

Can anyone rate?

The beginning was a bit smooth, but then the rest just sucked. His gun just changed with a flash. Make the guy reach into his pocket and then take it out.

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Sep 29, 2007 3:21 AM #60856

Quote from PivotMasterXDfan
okay dark, you got the invisible text code wrong. and ill edit this post when i upload it.
this is the code at work, dark
here it is plz rate and also, on the part when he bursts out of the ground, i know it sucked, i didnt know how else to ambush him.

Eh, that's good. I haven't used pivot in while, so I can't rank you. BUT, I do know the basics. For the most part, that look good. But, I'd have to say stiffiness is a probelm for you. And I didn't get the code wrong. What are you talking about? Lol.

And for the ambush, you could've had him fall from the sky, or materialize right behind him.

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Sep 29, 2007 3:25 AM #60859

oh, you must have edited it when i said you got the code wrong, and also... which part was stiff, or did every part have a little bit of stiffness.