Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Sep 30, 2007 2:30 AM #61107

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arent you suppost to make white circles and put them in the smoke??...anyways,plz rate this anim at least CLOSE to high beg..note:the smile shaks becus hes scared of dieing,cus he thinks he wont.and also,that rnadom stuff,hes haloosinating form that git on da head. http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7200/woovp9.gif no flaming plz :Happy: .

That was ok. But it's stiff. There's not enough movements to rate it.

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Sep 30, 2007 2:31 AM #61108

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Okay, with your information, I edited the animation, rank for this plz? =D

That looked a little better, but it's still jerky at the end. Same rank.

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Sep 30, 2007 2:44 AM #61109

Lol sorry if I am getting annoying, this is my last test for smoke. The ground vibrates a little from me fixing it up, but its better I hope =D
1 last time. . . Rank plz =D=D (Wow, I am getting annoying)

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Sep 30, 2007 2:46 AM #61110

What exactly did you change?

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Sep 30, 2007 2:50 AM #61111

The floor can be seen through the smoke now =D
K, im not posting that animation anymore but what was the part of the end of the smoke was choppy?

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Sep 30, 2007 2:52 AM #61113

Yeah, still. Look carefully at the smoke in the end. The left part of the smoke jerks up a little.

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Sep 30, 2007 3:03 AM #61115

I found it and fixed it =D
I dont want to go out with a problem, so I will show the update one LAST time.
I will also ask for a rank one last time =D

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Sep 30, 2007 3:04 AM #61116

A little better. It's not that much better, but it's less flawed. My turn to post an animation.

I know the fall was random.

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Sep 30, 2007 3:08 AM #61117

I don't think anyone has the physical ability to retain their balance after bending at the knees so far. Might wanna fix that dark.

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Sep 30, 2007 3:10 AM #61118

Sure thing. I have one question for you. Are you building up your posts to post an animation?

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Sep 30, 2007 3:10 AM #61119

I dont see it :p I bet its good tho

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Sep 30, 2007 3:11 AM #61120

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I dont see it :p I bet its good tho

How come you can't see it?

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Sep 30, 2007 3:13 AM #61121

I see it, dark, it would be very painful to fall with your legs bend like that.

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Sep 30, 2007 3:15 AM #61122

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I see it, dark, it would be very painful to fall with your legs bend like that.

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I know. That's why I did it.

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Sep 30, 2007 3:26 AM #61125

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I know. That's why I did it.

Can I get some criticisms and a rank for my running?

I think your a med beginner