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Sep 30, 2007 3:32 AM #61127
It's slow and choppy. Insert more animation between the beginning and end. To tell you the truth, it looked like a low beginner. Nothing personal. And thanks for ranking me. The first one.

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Sep 30, 2007 3:50 AM #61130
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How come you can't see it?

Oh, I can now :) my comp messed for a second. Lol your right that the fall was random, I donno if he would slide by his feet, or his feet would slide, I dont wanna find out tho, having to fall like that >.<
btw did you ask for a rank? Anyways I rate you med beginner too =)
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Sep 30, 2007 4:02 AM #61131
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It's slow and choppy. Insert more animation between the beginning and end. To tell you the truth, it looked like a low beginner. Nothing personal. And thanks for ranking me. The first one.

EDIT: 400th post!


I knew I should of put a ending, owellz lol.

btw, gratz
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Sep 30, 2007 7:23 AM #61179
My new movements test is here! woop and i luv it :D

Rank + comments please.

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/Jake1002/wierdo20ta.gif
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Sep 30, 2007 8:28 AM #61188
-http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/7420/magicwy2.gif-


this was my first anim
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Sep 30, 2007 8:31 AM #61190
The walking was good, for ur first ani, but still low beginner, keep going though.
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Sep 30, 2007 2:09 PM #61217
-http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/6105/attacks2va7.gif-

attacks test (i made a better stickman as well)
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Sep 30, 2007 2:12 PM #61219
Some of the kicks and punches were ok but still very choppy.
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Sep 30, 2007 2:55 PM #61221
check this one out hehe.
Its so small because if it were bigger it would get ruined -.-
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Sep 30, 2007 3:17 PM #61223
here is first
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here is second
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Sep 30, 2007 3:25 PM #61224
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here is first
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here is second
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Wow invisble noob midget ninjas appearing out of nowhere needs lots of work also taller sticks are easy to animate wiht
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check this one out hehe.
Its so small because if it were bigger it would get ruined -.-
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stiff choppy clips falls out there andother clip behind it :S
low beg both of you
bad reactions too
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Sep 30, 2007 3:47 PM #61225
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My new movements test is here! woop and i luv it :D

Rank + comments please.

http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/Jake1002/wierdo20ta.gif


One thing I know for sure, that was very smooth and un-stiff. Good job. That animation was...med-high beginner. If you keep making movements like those in all of your animations, you may be promoted to high beginner.
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Sep 30, 2007 4:23 PM #61226
Thanks, although i find it very hard to do that kinda of floppiness in other moves, say jumps, it just makes it look wierd..
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Sep 30, 2007 4:27 PM #61227
No, not movements like those, I meant the smoothness and un-stiffness.
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Sep 30, 2007 4:34 PM #61228
Oh i see, not the double jointed bendy the wrong way joints

But yeah, stiffness is probably one of my main problems, i think i've overcome it alot in this past week though.
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