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Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Oct 2, 2007 2:11 AM #61507
fall at the end was bad, a little slow, kind of choppy and why do the two other people just appear there, overall I'd say low-med beginner
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Oct 2, 2007 2:14 AM #61508
they appear because instead of him just attacking air,he was actually fighting guys with cloaking devices or something.
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Oct 2, 2007 2:18 AM #61509
maybe you should show the guys cloaking before he fights.
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Oct 2, 2007 2:20 AM #61510
mebe.....I was trying to make it a confuseing kinda anim.not the kind thats like "oh,no shit..."
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Oct 2, 2007 2:36 AM #61512
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its cool.but the reaction when he hits the ground coulda been better.also,migets may be easy to use,but that doesen't mean thier not fun!heres what I made useing them.rate me?

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hey..noone commented on this one.so what does everyone think of this one?(sorry for double post)
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Oct 2, 2007 2:49 AM #61513
it was kinda stiff and a little choppy with some bad easing mixed in there, but the blood was okay but the explosion can be much improved.

P.S. whered you get the hand stick? me likey the hand
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Oct 2, 2007 2:53 AM #61514
I made the hand myself.it was pretty easy realy.and the bloods not mine.I got it from droidz
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Oct 2, 2007 3:30 AM #61517
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something i whiped up in 5 mins OH look its also in my siggy -looks down-
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Oct 2, 2007 3:33 AM #61518
Work on the easing, everything else is pretty cool.

Here is mine I pieced up in 2 minutes

Test run

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I decided the only way I get better is if I make pivots that only have running actions in them, so I get use to doing running, then I go to the next animation.
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Oct 2, 2007 5:10 AM #61523
It's pretty good, but theres some choppyness with the figures arms, they look like they are in front of him for 1 frame and at his sides the next, and vice-versa
If you put a little bit more frames into every step it should look a lot better
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Oct 2, 2007 5:25 AM #61524
Quote from SoulEater
It's pretty good, but theres some choppyness with the figures arms, they look like they are in front of him for 1 frame and at his sides the next, and vice-versa
If you put a little bit more frames into every step it should look a lot better
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Ty for the crit

here is another one

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Oct 2, 2007 5:42 AM #61526
It's okay.Low beginner.It's stiff,choppy and has no easing applied.Try working on moving every joint a little bit each frame,and instead of moving at a constant pace,make it ease,like this
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Oct 2, 2007 1:45 PM #61537
But StickFollower running is good in my opinion

Only half of easing is applied in there, like.

|--|---|-----|--------|----------|-------------|[WALL]
He goes in full power, he doesn't slow down.
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Oct 2, 2007 4:41 PM #61543
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Made 2 new anims please rate and and such
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First ^
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Second^

Once again please rate and stuff
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Credz to Fraz for the beam tutorial

can i have some c&c please
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Oct 2, 2007 5:32 PM #61548
it looks pretty good, almost high beginner. it just has some weird movements that would kill your knees :P

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well ggd07, your getting the right idea about the running, but its a bit slow. if you would sopeed it up alil bit.. than itll look betta i think :P

But no one commented on these!!!
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Can any1 comment on these now??!!
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