Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Ggd07

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Oct 4, 2007 9:22 PM #61904
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This is my new animation 4th....
I thing the frames are faster in Firefox
Normal Frames are in internet explorer so if its fast in FireFox
Watch it in internet explorer ;]
Rate please!!! And tell me my mistakes:)

Thank you !
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Oct 4, 2007 9:30 PM #61908
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This is my new animation 4th....
I thing the frames are faster in Firefox
Normal Frames are in internet explorer so if its fast in FireFox
Watch it in internet explorer ;]
Rate please!!! And tell me my mistakes:)

Thank you !


One no one useing IE k firefox is what you want and jake your ganna be banned for advertising soon.
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Oct 4, 2007 10:04 PM #61916
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Oct 4, 2007 10:13 PM #61921
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Oct 4, 2007 10:22 PM #61925
I dont know if you wanted a crit and rank, but im going to do it anyways. The animation was really choppy and stiff, and there was almost no easing whatsoever. There was almost no reaction to anything that happened, and the physics were terrible too
Overall I rank you low beginner, and I ask you to spend more time on easing, and I advise you to look at some tuts here, or darkdemon.org
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Oct 4, 2007 10:28 PM #61929
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I dont know if you wanted a crit and rank, but im going to do it anyways. The animation was really choppy and stiff, and there was almost no easing whatsoever. There was almost no reaction to anything that happened, and the physics were terrible too
Overall I rank you low beginner, and I ask you to spend more time on easing, and I advise you to look at some tuts here, or darkdemon.org

what about my animation :D
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Oct 4, 2007 10:36 PM #61931
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Srry, I'll crit that one too :D
Then the demon bodd gets hit by the hammer when its falling out of the sky, it gets really choppy, and I see that you tried to make his legs move too fast. Try and put some more frames into a stick's steps, AND DONT FORGET TO USE EASING!
Heres a tip that might help: Try and move every joint on a stick each frame, that usually helps with stiffness, and another is while you make a stick move, keep a bit of it's body in the grey outline of the last frame, that helps a bunch with smoothing. (unless your going really fast, this tip helps a lot)
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Oct 4, 2007 11:32 PM #61938
Just a short animation I made. Some C&C on it plz?
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Oct 5, 2007 12:56 AM #61949
Err....Yeah did you just get lazy on the death scenes?
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Oct 5, 2007 1:06 AM #61951
Dont double post you newb
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Oct 5, 2007 1:09 AM #61955
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Dont double post you newb

No one from this page and the page before double posted, so what the hell are you going on about?
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Oct 5, 2007 2:09 AM #61960
Heres my latest animation. i was just toying around with 3D. Rank please.
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Oct 5, 2007 4:15 AM #61967
http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/mrkid/hopping_through_the_forest3a9b.gif
if the link worked please rate,it was my high begginer attempt.:Embarrassed: .
...if anyone is here..
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Oct 5, 2007 4:57 AM #61970
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Heres my latest animation. i was just toying around with 3D. Rank please.
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Nobody is going to crit this??

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http://www.pivothost.org/upload/v2/mrkid/hopping_through_the_forest3a9b.gif
if the link worked please rate,it was my high begginer attempt.:Embarrassed: .
...if anyone is here..

Its almost high beginner, the guy doesn't follow the boundary lines very well, and theres a bit of stiffness. I cant see the animation while im quoting so I dont have much to say. med beginner
Ggd07

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Oct 5, 2007 5:34 AM #61972
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One no one useing IE k firefox is what you want and jake your ganna be banned for advertising soon.


LOL thank you man .. Thank you for the crit that REALLY helped me alot really!!! THANKS MAN THANKS :Spiderman: :Undercover:

seriusly can someone crit me...

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