
Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.
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Dec 12, 2007 9:40 PM #71586
Dec 12, 2007 9:40 PM #71587
Dec 12, 2007 9:44 PM #71588
Work more on stiffness and easing. The reactions aren't good at all, and the whole animation is choppy.
Delphinus19
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Dec 12, 2007 9:57 PM #71590
Okay, now I gotta specify, First off, superbenjis, pretty good, the first spear stab was good, but the blood splatter on the wall(?) looks like you started a blood splatter but forgot to keep going. Second, Flaco415, You're okay, the punch was okay, but the feet switch plase without the body moving, and the blood was weird... was it an explosion mesh? and the running one was okay, the first guys arms go through the ground for a second, and the ufo doesnt seem right, the beam was a little crooked. Finally, Tolin, you could have stopped at the first jump, that was okay, but the second jump was really choppy and if he bent straight down, how'd he launch to the left?
Now someone judge mine!
Now someone judge mine!
Dec 12, 2007 10:07 PM #71592
thanx Delphinus19.....but i thought the legs were supposed to switch place
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Dec 12, 2007 11:41 PM #71611
Yes they are, but the person should at least move a little, otherwise it looks kinda odd...
Dec 12, 2007 11:46 PM #71612
Quote from flac0415that is funny.....med beginner
can someone rank my punching and walking animation
And this animation
dude you (porly) copied the sticks from pivot RJ
Dec 12, 2007 11:50 PM #71613
Quote from flac0415**** U SOULEATER.....UR ANIMATIONS ARENT GOOD EITHER THEY R SOME SHIT.....URS R STIFF 2
dude... just cause someone isn't perfect at animating, does not mean he can't give C&C infact Devour is way better at giving C&C than animating. not that he's a bad animator in teh first place. on a further note, this is a quick test i just did out of boredom and tutorial watchingness

Dec 12, 2007 11:52 PM #71614
Quote from flac0415**** U SOULEATER.....UR ANIMATIONS ARENT GOOD EITHER THEY R SOME SHIT.....URS R STIFF 2
Everyone's animations in here are supposed to be shit, it's the ****ing Beginner's Section.
@Dio: His arm, (left), wobbles when you put it back into place. I think you should fix that. I'd say it was pretty good otherwise. Loved the smoothness on the legs. Lol.
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Dec 13, 2007 1:10 AM #71634
Dec 13, 2007 1:14 AM #71635
the walking isnt the greatest. try and move every part of his body when you make someone walk. otherwise it's stiff, and not too choppy, but he stopps in mid air for half a second, fix that too.
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Dec 13, 2007 1:16 AM #71636
image shack made him freeze rite there. thnx for the tips!:Smile:
Dec 13, 2007 1:17 AM #71637
Quote from flac0415**** U SOULEATER.....UR ANIMATIONS ARENT GOOD EITHER THEY R SOME SHIT.....URS R STIFF 2
Fuck you the most. I can still give good C&C, and I dont care if my pivot isn't good. I use flash, worthless piv-fag.
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Dec 13, 2007 2:39 AM #71639
:Sweating: uh here are some of my anims...











Dec 13, 2007 3:50 AM #71645
This was kind of an easing test. Can you tell me if the gun arm was eased ok or not?
And tell me if I should make this into a movie...
LINK: http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x180/korkorwingie/thberretta_head_shot.gif
And tell me if I should make this into a movie...
LINK: http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x180/korkorwingie/thberretta_head_shot.gif