This is my first fighting scene made with Pivot, STYKS, and Paint for editing. I would like to get feed back and tips before I continue on. Thank you very much!

Its not as good as I would like it to be. lol.

;Search on Google or search Terkoiz he has tons of flash animations and help on his vids its common if Google has it but I Peter YouTube to get good demonstrations

http://www.fileize.com/view/e92a9e9e-3e8/
preview for a character

Okay while I was waiting I started making a new animation. BTW unfinished.
Im sorry its on youtube but I like adding music and all dat extrra shtuff
Please comment if these are good :). thank you!

(might want to turn down ur sound XD)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1uoX6sMttk8

People made Oppa Gangum Style pivots, so....

XD nice one Night avenger! I like how you took some of your anims and put them together at the end! :)

I got bored at the starting but it got real good.

Judging by your other anims, it seems you rushed? It was still better than I can do! :)

Since no one posts here, i'll just leave this here then.

Hey Zed do you have any thing to say about my videos? :3

I would like to get some critiques maybe... :P

I tried, and I couldn't make it look good and have good poses so thats the only thing I can really do

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Hey Zed do you have any thing to say about my videos? :3

I would like to get some critiques maybe... :P

But they're on YouTube. I'd have to click something to watch them...

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This is my first fighting scene made with Pivot, STYKS, and Paint for editing. I would like to get feed back and tips before I continue on. Thank you very much!

Its not as good as I would like it to be. lol.

It's better than I was expecting. It was just a little stiff and a little undereased. Even on the slow motion bits it would be best to try to move every joint in every frame, even if it does take ages. And when the black guy jumped at the end I thought he didn't have enough anticipation and there was very little easing there in particular. Your movements are good though.

Dancing without any specific moves.

Thank you Zed :). I will continue and try to use ur advise!

If u dont mind clicking on another vid I think i improved more with my Stratz vs. Man fight :P.
I think it was more smooth in parts than my first :P. I am currently working on taking my anims in very small parts and seeing wut my result is before i continue on. :) these are more of tests then fights lol...
I dont think i will be able to get flash any time soon XD so now i just want to improve where im at.

Thank u!

Because the links died for the gifs i posted, heres a repost.
Gunshot test
http://www.fileize.com/view/05ee034e-f12/
Preview
http://www.fileize.com/view/4f754237-cba/

Sexy, just sexy.